Reviews from
Togetherness
2 total reviews
Comment from
LisaMay
I think you are right to point out that the food on Christmas Day is secondary to the pleasure of being with your family. You have generalised the food to 'any food' and perhaps that is not the intention of the contest prompt.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
Thank you for your review. I hope they don?t disqualify me.
Comment from
Carol Hillebrenner
A really great picture of a family enjoying themselves and a lovely poem bring joy just in reading what you have written. Very well done. Good luck in the contest and blessings in the new year.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
Thank you for your wonderful review.
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