Heavenly Father
He is our father.4 total reviews
Comment from Boogienights
I love this poem you have written about God, because it shows the reader how deep your faith and appreciation of the Lord is. Every word is true and I agree with it, I can see why you did so well in the contest. You are a fine writer, thank you for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
I love this poem you have written about God, because it shows the reader how deep your faith and appreciation of the Lord is. Every word is true and I agree with it, I can see why you did so well in the contest. You are a fine writer, thank you for sharing. :)
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2021
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I didn't nor do well in this contest, but I did receive one vote, and I was in a three-way tie for 3rd place
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I think it's a wonderful poem...
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Thanks
Comment from Patty Palmer
A meaningful poem about our Lord and how we are forgiven for the stupid messes we make of our lives from time to time. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
A meaningful poem about our Lord and how we are forgiven for the stupid messes we make of our lives from time to time. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from lyenochka
I like your focus on God being the Father of all and the blessings He gives us in our families. Your poem shows us all the qualities of the perfect father we have in the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
I like your focus on God being the Father of all and the blessings He gives us in our families. Your poem shows us all the qualities of the perfect father we have in the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thanks.
Comment from icetraigh
This is a nice, simple poem about God. It conforms to standard AA/BB rhyming technique very well. It's clean, crisp, and to the point. It's a nice, standard poem. Well done.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
This is a nice, simple poem about God. It conforms to standard AA/BB rhyming technique very well. It's clean, crisp, and to the point. It's a nice, standard poem. Well done.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021
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Why is it only good?
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Because it's simple.
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Ok, but my poems are heartfelt.
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Do you want to enter my loop poetry contest?
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Ok, but that doesn't automatically earn you a 5-star rating. You can't argue your way into a higher rating. Sorry. Accept what you got and move on, please.
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I will, but I asked you to join my loop poetry contest.