A Prayer of Thanks, Inspired
A silly poem of gratefulness.37 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Very nicely done. You express your love to write and your friends. I see nothing wrong with this write. Thanks for sharing your talent. Merry Christmas.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
Very nicely done. You express your love to write and your friends. I see nothing wrong with this write. Thanks for sharing your talent. Merry Christmas.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you Ben! I thought I would just have a little fun lol!
Comment from damommy
I think God loves it when we're thankful for the little things in life. I say thanks a lot about such little things because they are important to me, and I want Him to know it. It's not a silly poem at all.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
I think God loves it when we're thankful for the little things in life. I say thanks a lot about such little things because they are important to me, and I want Him to know it. It's not a silly poem at all.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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I appreciate your thought that little things that we are grateful for are not silly at all. I think you're right. We need to be grateful for everything don't we?
Have a great day!
Comment from Anne Johnston
And I love your poem of thankfulness. The Bible tells us to give thanks in everything, and I too am glad for the pens - the tools that we have to be able to write down our thoughts and inspirations.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
And I love your poem of thankfulness. The Bible tells us to give thanks in everything, and I too am glad for the pens - the tools that we have to be able to write down our thoughts and inspirations.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much! I was inspired by Robin's poem. I thought.. why not be thankful for the things that I like the most :-)
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You are welcome
Comment from TPAC
A true writer, illustrating compassion for things cherished forming their happiness, finding myself no faults in these conveyances: being a lover of pens myself. A creative read in my opinion.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
A true writer, illustrating compassion for things cherished forming their happiness, finding myself no faults in these conveyances: being a lover of pens myself. A creative read in my opinion.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for these kind thoughts from a fellow pen-lover:)
Tina
Comment from dragonpoet
Tina,
This is a cute poem about the love of writing. It is a round about way to thank God for your ability to write. I write in pencil so it is easier to edit.
It is great to be inspired by another writer on the site.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
Tina,
This is a cute poem about the love of writing. It is a round about way to thank God for your ability to write. I write in pencil so it is easier to edit.
It is great to be inspired by another writer on the site.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Merry Christmas
Joan
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Joan for your time and review. I use erasable pens. I found some that work great! Frixion pens in black. I use pencils too, bit they have to be pretty ones,lol!
Merry Christmas! It's getting close:)
Tina
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You?re welcome, Tina
I have tried using erasable pens but they always leave a shadow of what was written before editing.
Joan
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I know what you mean about erasable pens. They we're such a gimmick.The Frixion pens are different. They have a rubber tip that erases well! You should try them.
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I have never seen this brand. Where can l find then
Joan
Comment from Ritsal
This was a fun and entertaining read, with a lot of truth. Too often we fail to appreciate what blessings we have in life, especially the small everyday things we take for granted. Have a blessed day.
Best wishes,
Rita
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
This was a fun and entertaining read, with a lot of truth. Too often we fail to appreciate what blessings we have in life, especially the small everyday things we take for granted. Have a blessed day.
Best wishes,
Rita
Comment Written 17-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Small things are like sprinkles in life. They just add a little extra joy! It's so easy to take things for granted. I try hard not to but I fail often,lol.
Merry Christmas 🎄
Tina
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I agree. Merry Christmas to you also.
Comment from patcelaw
All too often we as a people fail to be as thankful for the wonderful things we have. I enjoy my life and am thankful that God has given me 83.5 years of life.
Patricia
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
All too often we as a people fail to be as thankful for the wonderful things we have. I enjoy my life and am thankful that God has given me 83.5 years of life.
Patricia
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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So nice when someone tells me something personal so we can connect! 83.5 years young!...good for you!!! My dad is 84 and just as thankful to our Lord. Thanks for reaching out and reading:)
Tina
Comment from Boogienights
But how do you really feel about pens? Hahaha...just kidding! This is a great poem and it made me smile...I like pens as well. Markers too. Thanks for sharing. :)
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
But how do you really feel about pens? Hahaha...just kidding! This is a great poem and it made me smile...I like pens as well. Markers too. Thanks for sharing. :)
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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You couldn't tell, lol? Thanks for stopping by to review my silly poem!
Tina
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
I have always learnt to be grateful for the little things in life. It is not good to want too much and to be greedy. You seem to have the same outlook on life - a good thing.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
I have always learnt to be grateful for the little things in life. It is not good to want too much and to be greedy. You seem to have the same outlook on life - a good thing.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thanks for the compliment. I DO have to restrain myself in Wal Mart or office stores! New notebooks and fresh pens...oh my!
Tina
Comment from LisaMay
I agree with you! It is so reassuring to know there is a collection of pens at the ready. God's love is great, all encompassing, but it is also the little things that we marvel at, such as a functioning pen.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
I agree with you! It is so reassuring to know there is a collection of pens at the ready. God's love is great, all encompassing, but it is also the little things that we marvel at, such as a functioning pen.
Comment Written 16-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Yes, you get it! We are supposed to be as little children to enter heaven, right? :) They do make me happy! I have my favorite pens and even have refills for them. Ha!
Tina