Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Congratulations on your win. You are coming along very nicely. You really did a great job with the rhyming. I'm trying to figure out if I'm still in the good old days.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2021

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Such a fun poem. Congratulations to you Pookietoo. So glad that you did so well with your poem. Love the remember when version; we perhaps did many of the things you describe.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021

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Comment from Ramona Scarborough

Excellent

Okay, I remember all these. You seemed to cover many pleasures we enjoyed. My only picky comments: Use of some too many times, and look to see where commas were appropriate.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021

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Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

I remember enjoying those simple activities too - this run-through of wholesome affordable activities played together is described well and makes me feel very nostalgic.

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

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Comment from zanya

Exceptional

This Good Old Days poem is a gem - filled with a veritable cornucopia of delights from those far-off days - simpler pleasures than are extant these days - the poem exudes a tone of joy at recalling these activities - has to make it to the winners' enclosure

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021

Thanks.