No Choice
When pain of guilt can no longer be tolerated.3 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love these lines: "Dive into the shimmering moonlit lake
Gliding down in a feathery sweep" this is a very romantic introduction to a heart break:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings, and the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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I love these lines: "Dive into the shimmering moonlit lake
Gliding down in a feathery sweep" this is a very romantic introduction to a heart break:) Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings, and the contest.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Thank you for taking the time to read and the feedback.
Comment from Eunice Amero
No one should ever do that. You should never even think about killing yourself though we all get down at one time or the other. It was a good poem but never do that. God is the one who choose your time to die. Good poem Good luck
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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No one should ever do that. You should never even think about killing yourself though we all get down at one time or the other. It was a good poem but never do that. God is the one who choose your time to die. Good poem Good luck
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Again, thanks of the six stars and for taking the time to read and provide feedback. I agree killing one's self, is not the answer, and it hurts many people.
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Yes lol also agree. You are more then welcome.
Comment from Brian S. Watson
Nice short and to-the-point poem! great job! I think you should think about joining one of those poetry contests that are constantly having! I really think that you'd be a shoo-in. Something to think about! good luck and I look forward to reading all of your future poems! For sure!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Nice short and to-the-point poem! great job! I think you should think about joining one of those poetry contests that are constantly having! I really think that you'd be a shoo-in. Something to think about! good luck and I look forward to reading all of your future poems! For sure!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Thank you again for the six stars and for the read and encouraging words. Much appreciated.
