Rat Beats Mr. Rat
A rat tale.2 total reviews
Comment from Moon baby
Cute mouse or is that a rat? Your artwork is perfect for your theme of "R's"! It seems as though this could be fun and frustrating combining the "R" words to create this. It's original and one of a kind!
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Cute mouse or is that a rat? Your artwork is perfect for your theme of "R's"! It seems as though this could be fun and frustrating combining the "R" words to create this. It's original and one of a kind!
Comment Written 12-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
I only gave you four stars for this because you did not totally follow the rules for this alliteration contest which states that "every" word must begin with the same letter. I'm not sure if you have enough time to make the necessary changes to make this meet the guidelines but you might want to try.
Rdfrdmom2
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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I only gave you four stars for this because you did not totally follow the rules for this alliteration contest which states that "every" word must begin with the same letter. I'm not sure if you have enough time to make the necessary changes to make this meet the guidelines but you might want to try.
Rdfrdmom2
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you for letting me know. I have changed the lines. Is it now better for five stars rating? Please check!
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Please check my poem. Is it better now for a five star rating?