Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Oh, absolutely she needed to get away from him! He would never be hers 100%, she would have to share his attentions with men! No way could she be expected to do that. I think her mother needed to know. Anyway, I've already matched her with Roger!! Lol. Well done again! :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2023

Another big thanks for getting to these older chapters. It amazes me to hear from you, Sandra.

Comment from Pearl Edwards

Excellent

I am new to this story but found it easy to follow and am now intrigued to o find out more about Doctor Marjorie Lange after escaping what would not have been a happy ever after marriage.
Cheers

 Comment Written 08-Jan-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Jan-2023

It was a while back that I worked on this story. You are encouraging me to get back into writing. Thank you.

Comment from irishauthorme

Excellent

Intriguing that Henry, a closet gay (What a bombshell!), would still want to marry and have children. Could he then be considered bi-sexual? Or perhaps he just wants to leave a legacy. Being married would certainly help him hide the fact that he is, indeed, gay.
It will be interesting to see how Roger affects Marjorie's life, and who else may come into the picture.
Good ending!
irish

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2021

Being a bi-sexual, now that is a good thought and I just might use that idea. You are a super help in many ways. Thanks for reading this one.
Happy holidays!!

Comment from Mary Shifman

Excellent

I was happy to see another chapter of this interesting story. I think Marjorie will do well in Alaska once she gets used to the long, dark winters and long, light summers. I'm curious as to how things will unfold with her new friend, Roger.

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021

Thank you for taking time to read this. I appreciate your comments.

Comment from Annmuma

Excellent

And the plot thickens!!!! Lots of new avenues to explore now --from the mysterious Alaskan the the bi-guy left at home. Good story and well written. I enjoyed -- couldn't even find any spag! ann

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thanks for looking for spag. Glad you didn't find it, Ann. Glad to hear from you on this Chapter.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I am happy to get another addition to this story. I really enjoyed reading. Please post more.

Just before sleep came, she murmured questions. "Julie and Leo are married. (comma needed after 'questions')

The next day, Marjorie concentrated steadily on solving housing problems (The following day)

Henry's soft, gentle voice rang through her. "I want you to (probably a comma after her, he's speaking)

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

I appreciate you reading this and especially for your suggestions. Many thanks.

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Oh! That would put a damper on a romantic relationship. I wonder why Henry proposed. Did he want her more as a baby producer?
Great use of dialogue and I like the typical concerned mother, who doesn't know everything about Henry.
I also like the review of the evening before which prepares us for her future relationship with Roger.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021

Thanks got reading this and for all your comments. You are encouraging, Helen.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

That would've been a huge shock to Marjorie, with her boyfriend Henry, dancing with Eddie Frank a gay man, well that indeed be a shock, what will she do now? Although there is Roger Hendricks, love your story, well done,blessings Roy

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021

Thanks for reading this. Now I have to figure out how to answer your question. I appreciate your encouragement.

reply by royowen on 10-Dec-2021

Well done.

Comment from MissMerri

Exceptional

I'm glad I had a six left for this, Miss A. I think I've said this many times before, but you are an excellent story-teller. You make me feel as if I know these characters in your story, and because I "know" them, I care very much what happens to them. I'm so hooked, I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold. Thanks for the pleasure of reading your stories. MissM

 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021

What's this? Not one correction listed? I'm sure some are due. Thanks for the big six, it's a rating I could never expect. You are encouraging. Maybe I'll think of something for the next chapter after all.

Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent story my friend! I adore the way the characters interact together and the storyline keeps my attention!

Thanks so much for sharing and many blessings to you and your family;-)

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021

Thanks so much for your comments and encouraging me to think of a next chapter. Blessings to you, too, during this sacred time.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 12-Dec-2021

Blessings ;-)