Dulcius Ex Asperis
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "DEA - Three"A sequel to my debut novel, Par Angusta Ad Augusta
2 total reviews
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of this chapter of the story reminisces a frolicking love affair between Jefferson and Monique suddenly caught in a web of uncertainties occasioned by the Dormer's desire to run for congress.
The work highlights their seeming tolerance of each other in the midst huddles placed between them by the pandemic; Monique's covert, but consistently nurtured suspicions of flirtatious tendencies in Jefferson; his adopted children; Anya, their Russian born nanny, Elaine, Monique's nurse; Presley, their pet dog; and Monique's now being announced pregnancy.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of covert conflict tinder anecdotes reminiscent of an impending turmoil.
Excellent work. Bravo.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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The objective correlative of this chapter of the story reminisces a frolicking love affair between Jefferson and Monique suddenly caught in a web of uncertainties occasioned by the Dormer's desire to run for congress.
The work highlights their seeming tolerance of each other in the midst huddles placed between them by the pandemic; Monique's covert, but consistently nurtured suspicions of flirtatious tendencies in Jefferson; his adopted children; Anya, their Russian born nanny, Elaine, Monique's nurse; Presley, their pet dog; and Monique's now being announced pregnancy.
The work earns its texture through its effective use of covert conflict tinder anecdotes reminiscent of an impending turmoil.
Excellent work. Bravo.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend! This piece is well thought out and well written;-) The storyline was captivating and held my attention and the characters interact nicely together!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Excellent story my friend! This piece is well thought out and well written;-) The storyline was captivating and held my attention and the characters interact nicely together!
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you for reviewing.
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;-)
