Daydreams from the Ashes
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Snippets"Poems and meditations
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Comment from AliMom
Don't you dare apologize. It's a wonderful stream of consciousness poem. You write better drugged than many people write sober and clear-headed. I particularly liked your ending "A bird on wing let's go and falls up". Your words are excellently descriptive. Stay well, stay warm, stay blessed.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Don't you dare apologize. It's a wonderful stream of consciousness poem. You write better drugged than many people write sober and clear-headed. I particularly liked your ending "A bird on wing let's go and falls up". Your words are excellently descriptive. Stay well, stay warm, stay blessed.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I?m glad it came out alright and that you took the time to check it out. Thank you. Have a wonderful day.
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It is always my pleasure to read anything you write.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Not messy - just three separate and very different pieces.
#1 This one addresses most directly your treatment and how the drugs used affect you. It portrays something of a dreamlike state and your mind drifting calmly from one thing to another.
#2 Some of my favourite things! Always a good excuse for poetry to list the things that make you happy.
#3 I like this the best - the striking format highlights the original and vivid image of the bird falling up!
Steve
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Not messy - just three separate and very different pieces.
#1 This one addresses most directly your treatment and how the drugs used affect you. It portrays something of a dreamlike state and your mind drifting calmly from one thing to another.
#2 Some of my favourite things! Always a good excuse for poetry to list the things that make you happy.
#3 I like this the best - the striking format highlights the original and vivid image of the bird falling up!
Steve
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Thinking is a good part of our daily life as well as math. Being a writer makes up a good portion of our day. Sometimes to keep up with the reviews we spend lots of time at the computer. But it also keeps our thinking caps on...
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thinking is a good part of our daily life as well as math. Being a writer makes up a good portion of our day. Sometimes to keep up with the reviews we spend lots of time at the computer. But it also keeps our thinking caps on...
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I do enjoy the part of writing that is the work too. I hope you have a wonderful day.
Comment from 1Dreamer
I loved these reflections and look forward definitely to reading more of your work. You write beautifully. I can feel your words so beautifully put together. They sharpen the senses and wrap you in their essence.
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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I loved these reflections and look forward definitely to reading more of your work. You write beautifully. I can feel your words so beautifully put together. They sharpen the senses and wrap you in their essence.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your time and I hope you have a wonderful day.