Winter portrait
Poem 5/7/52 total reviews
Comment from Eternal Muse
That was absolutely beautiful. You made an excellent job on the imagery and presentation. Excellent use of enjambment.
The picture is phenomenal.
Loved it - good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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That was absolutely beautiful. You made an excellent job on the imagery and presentation. Excellent use of enjambment.
The picture is phenomenal.
Loved it - good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thanks for a superb reveiw zanya
Comment from Brendajay
Ah, this is a visual Haiku in a few ways. Bare trees etched starkly. Against a wintry sunset glow. Good work here. I feel like the first stanza should be complete but it extends into the second stanza. It works though. Thank you.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Ah, this is a visual Haiku in a few ways. Bare trees etched starkly. Against a wintry sunset glow. Good work here. I feel like the first stanza should be complete but it extends into the second stanza. It works though. Thank you.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Great reveiw zanya
