Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Running Blind ~ Chapter 29"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
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Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Comment Written 05-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2022
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Dear Committee,
Thank you for the recognition and beautiful seven star rating! I am honored!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the new year,
Sally Law
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a mystery story. Evidently the phone call that Ana made to her buddy, lighten up the whereabouts of her surprising plan. Sometimes surprises do turn sour. I wonder if this one does. She is very confident in herself.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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What a mystery story. Evidently the phone call that Ana made to her buddy, lighten up the whereabouts of her surprising plan. Sometimes surprises do turn sour. I wonder if this one does. She is very confident in herself.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars. Christmas blessings,
Sally XOs
Comment from BethShelby
Excellent chapter. It is good to see the blind girl be able to be home again. She is a very generous person to be able to give the doctor something the hospital needed badly as well as the help patients in need. I worry for Analiese. She seem to be living dangerously. I'm looking forward to more but I gess I'll have to wait.
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Excellent chapter. It is good to see the blind girl be able to be home again. She is a very generous person to be able to give the doctor something the hospital needed badly as well as the help patients in need. I worry for Analiese. She seem to be living dangerously. I'm looking forward to more but I gess I'll have to wait.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous rating. I'm glad you're enjoying this as I near the end. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xoxo's
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
More suspense, from this latest case worked on by The Blind Girl! I hope Analiese's plan will work--whatever it is. All the players are in the outfield, poised to stop Tony from scoring a home run. And what's the deal with Agent Whitefield? I guess we'll soon find out.
Some minor suggestions:
I didn't realize all the players involved in this web of international intrique and art fraud. [misspelling of "intrigue"]
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I didn't realize all the players involved in this web of international intrigue and art fraud.
Alfanzi hired an assassin who killed my partner while attempting to kill me trying to get to Analiese.
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Alfanzi hired an assassin who killed my partner while attempting to kill me, trying to get to Analiese.
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If Analiese pulls off whatever she's trying to do, she could make a good undercover agent, herself. Bravo, for your skillful writing!
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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More suspense, from this latest case worked on by The Blind Girl! I hope Analiese's plan will work--whatever it is. All the players are in the outfield, poised to stop Tony from scoring a home run. And what's the deal with Agent Whitefield? I guess we'll soon find out.
Some minor suggestions:
I didn't realize all the players involved in this web of international intrique and art fraud. [misspelling of "intrigue"]
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I didn't realize all the players involved in this web of international intrigue and art fraud.
Alfanzi hired an assassin who killed my partner while attempting to kill me trying to get to Analiese.
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Alfanzi hired an assassin who killed my partner while attempting to kill me, trying to get to Analiese.
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If Analiese pulls off whatever she's trying to do, she could make a good undercover agent, herself. Bravo, for your skillful writing!
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and generous star topper! I'm so very blessed and honored. I wasn't expecting you back so soon. You are such a gift. Thank you for this and for the suggestions. I will repair them now. Sending you my best today as always, and love and blessings for Christmas,
Sal xoxo's...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Oh dear, I hope Ana knows what she's doing. Tony has no problem killing women, or hurting them. I'm all caught up now, so I'm going to have to wait until Sunday now. Well done, Sal, this was an excellent chapter, and I'll have to give you a virtual six, unfortunately. Warm hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Oh dear, I hope Ana knows what she's doing. Tony has no problem killing women, or hurting them. I'm all caught up now, so I'm going to have to wait until Sunday now. Well done, Sal, this was an excellent chapter, and I'll have to give you a virtual six, unfortunately. Warm hugs, dear friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and for catching up! I?m so thrilled! Sending you my best today and Christmas blessings,
Sal XOs
Comment from robyn corum
Sally,
Very interesting developments here. I'm so impressed that Sally could just write that kind of huge check!
Notes:
1.) patients'
2.) Our newest team member, Ken Was(h)burn, sat beside me
3.) and I could feel the heat between him and a man (who had) just entered through the front door:
4.) "No, on the contrary, Ken. I feel the same(,)" I said in support.
Thanks a bunch!
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Sally,
Very interesting developments here. I'm so impressed that Sally could just write that kind of huge check!
Notes:
1.) patients'
2.) Our newest team member, Ken Was(h)burn, sat beside me
3.) and I could feel the heat between him and a man (who had) just entered through the front door:
4.) "No, on the contrary, Ken. I feel the same(,)" I said in support.
Thanks a bunch!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and kind help. It is so appreciated. My voice reader is not working right now and it is difficult to prove my work. I appreciate your kind help so much today. Sending along my very best as always, Sally XOs
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Proofread my work?.
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I do proof for folks, but I have to charge for it. I'm in the middle of one book right now.
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There are several people on here who do it and do it well. Thank you, again. :))
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Absolutely! And if you do decide to go for a pro I know that Rama Devi is good and I think Nor does it, too.
Comment from royowen
Analiese seems to be walking on that metaphorical tightrope that puts her in a position of danger, how brave are these people? I love how you weave you tale, inexorably moving to that marvellous place that only the author's imagination knows, and even then, like a well laid garden still springs it's surprises, delight even the author, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Analiese seems to be walking on that metaphorical tightrope that puts her in a position of danger, how brave are these people? I love how you weave you tale, inexorably moving to that marvellous place that only the author's imagination knows, and even then, like a well laid garden still springs it's surprises, delight even the author, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. Both mean so much! Blessings, Roy dear,
Sal :))
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Most welcome
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hi Sal.
Ana is taking a very big chance using herself as the bait to pull Tony into a trap. clearly, he is a dangerous man and now she has put herself into a dangerous position.
The right people are there to get him off the street and back into prison, but it is still a huge risk. She has a lot to lose in this situation, not the least of which is her life.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Hi Sal.
Ana is taking a very big chance using herself as the bait to pull Tony into a trap. clearly, he is a dangerous man and now she has put herself into a dangerous position.
The right people are there to get him off the street and back into prison, but it is still a huge risk. She has a lot to lose in this situation, not the least of which is her life.
PAL Z
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the wonderful review and personal comments. Yes, those who stand up are always at risk, dear pal. You know about that. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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You're welcome, Sal.
PAL Z
Comment from Ric Myworld
Back in the swing of things from home and at full speed ahead. I'm glued to the screen just wishing I had some greasy buttered popcorn to enjoy with your entertainment. I don't usually bother pointing out little slipups, but as meticulous as you are, I figured you would rather know the flip flop of two letters. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
She's leading us to him so that we can send him back to prison as he awaits trail [trial].
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Back in the swing of things from home and at full speed ahead. I'm glued to the screen just wishing I had some greasy buttered popcorn to enjoy with your entertainment. I don't usually bother pointing out little slipups, but as meticulous as you are, I figured you would rather know the flip flop of two letters. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
She's leading us to him so that we can send him back to prison as he awaits trail [trial].
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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LOL! I have had so many typos on this. My voice reader is down and boy do I miss it! Thank you for the catch and super kind stars. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs
Comment from country ranch writer
Now Sally's home she can rest a bit easier having everything familiar around her.It was mighty nice she gave the Doc all that money to do good for everybody and for the MRI.we just wait and see what does down at the marina.trying to be patient waiting for the next chapter. You keep me in stitches waiting my friend.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Now Sally's home she can rest a bit easier having everything familiar around her.It was mighty nice she gave the Doc all that money to do good for everybody and for the MRI.we just wait and see what does down at the marina.trying to be patient waiting for the next chapter. You keep me in stitches waiting my friend.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review and beautiful stars. It is so appreciated. Sending along my very best to you and yours, Sally XOs
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