My Heavenly Father
I am my Father's Child36 total reviews
Comment from ESOSTINE
I could not but fall in love with your story in the poem so beautifully put together without forcing the words. I am glad you finally found a Father when you had known. Well done, dear.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I could not but fall in love with your story in the poem so beautifully put together without forcing the words. I am glad you finally found a Father when you had known. Well done, dear.
Comment Written 09-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Comment from Annmuma
What a beautiful poem and wonderful story of strength and love. I suspect this entry will do well in the contest. It is well-written and is a work that the reader 'feels' not just reads. Good luck. ann
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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What a beautiful poem and wonderful story of strength and love. I suspect this entry will do well in the contest. It is well-written and is a work that the reader 'feels' not just reads. Good luck. ann
Comment Written 08-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2022
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I'm exceedingly glad you could feel my poem. That means a lot to me. Thank you for your kind review and your best wishes for the contest.
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
i can definitely feel your pain. For, many black children go fatherless. Nevertheless, I thought you could have been a little more creative. For, an artist should get his best work out of writing from pain. Less emotions. More creative art...should be the objective.
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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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i can definitely feel your pain. For, many black children go fatherless. Nevertheless, I thought you could have been a little more creative. For, an artist should get his best work out of writing from pain. Less emotions. More creative art...should be the objective.
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Comment Written 18-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review. Your points are well taken and I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Earl Corp
This a great entry into the My Father contest and could have gone in a Faith poetry contest. Your poem rhymed, madee sense, was spiritual, and touched the reader emotionally. Very Nice Job. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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This a great entry into the My Father contest and could have gone in a Faith poetry contest. Your poem rhymed, madee sense, was spiritual, and touched the reader emotionally. Very Nice Job. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review, especially the sixth star. I appreciate you taking time to read my poem.
Comment from royowen
What a wonderful poem of faith, God is not like men or women either, but we were meant to be like Him, because we are in His image. I love this work, you could have allowed bitterness to claim you, but you didn't, and you discovered he was beside all the time, beautifully written in smooth,, articulate, rhyming verse, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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What a wonderful poem of faith, God is not like men or women either, but we were meant to be like Him, because we are in His image. I love this work, you could have allowed bitterness to claim you, but you didn't, and you discovered he was beside all the time, beautifully written in smooth,, articulate, rhyming verse, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you, my Friend.
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Most welcome
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Wow. That is a crazy cool image! It looks exactly like a soldier kneeling. Wow. This poem is a lovely addition - it touches on those moments when a soldier needs his heavenly Father. Even if he doesn't have an earthly one, he can take comfort in the One who cares about all of us. Nice!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Wow. That is a crazy cool image! It looks exactly like a soldier kneeling. Wow. This poem is a lovely addition - it touches on those moments when a soldier needs his heavenly Father. Even if he doesn't have an earthly one, he can take comfort in the One who cares about all of us. Nice!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Very well put. I'm into clovers myself, and I love people from Alabama. Thank you for your sweet review.
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. One might think that growing up not knowing your biological father and then losing one's mother early in life, that a relationship with the heavenly father might be hard to find. But not for this poet. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. One might think that growing up not knowing your biological father and then losing one's mother early in life, that a relationship with the heavenly father might be hard to find. But not for this poet. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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I have struggled at times but I've always known God was there for me when I needed Him. Thank you for your review.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a well written poem . It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Photo is breathtaking and compliments your words well. Beautiful but sad. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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This is a well written poem . It has a great flow and rhyme scheme. Photo is breathtaking and compliments your words well. Beautiful but sad. Nicely done.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much for your sweet review, especially for the sixth star. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Precious Owuamalam
Yes, you are. Reading this brought a lot of emotions to me. Losing both parents at an early age can be such a huge disaster. But then, God will not present to us a challenge that would outweigh us.
My very best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Yes, you are. Reading this brought a lot of emotions to me. Losing both parents at an early age can be such a huge disaster. But then, God will not present to us a challenge that would outweigh us.
My very best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review and best wishes. And you're right; we can overcome any trial, no matter how severe, if we'll just place our faith and trust in God.
Comment from papa55mike
That happens to be a truth I wish I knew many years ago, and it would have helped me in many ways. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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That happens to be a truth I wish I knew many years ago, and it would have helped me in many ways. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 08-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review and thought-provoking comment. I can relate. And God's blessings to you as well.