Comment from karenina

Excellent

Know what? I sang it aloud to the melody from "It Came Upon a Midnight Clear"---and it flowed perfectly! Divine intervention, must have been! I just naturally went to that tune..

A blessed song! I do so love the Christmas Season!

Excellent Roy!

Karenina

 Comment Written 09-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021

Thanks so much Karen, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Deniz22

Exceptional

The old, old story never really gets old. It simply gets sweeter even after years of contemplation.
Well done my brother, may God continue to usd you to HIs glory.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021

Thanks so much Dennis, for these wonderful comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

I love this, Roy! :) Beautiful words and breathtaking artwork. This is the year we all should gather and praise God's glory and in His son. We are so blessed and have many things to be thankful for. I'm glad you continue to write inspiring words to remind us how precious life is.

Thank you for sharing!
Always your fan,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks again dear Shana for your wonderful comments, you ate knondness itself,

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

This is a new and lovely version of the entire Christmas story in song and I'm sure the children with enjoy it. Christmas has some beautiful songs which we all love but I also look forward to the new ones that come out at this time of year.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks Beth, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a magical song and very festive too Roy and I can just imagine you singing this in your church with your guitar. A fine Christmas poem to cheer us all, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks Dolly, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Judy Lawless

Excellent

It's nice to have some new lyrics for Christmas songs, Roy. You've retold the familiar story, but in simpler words, which I'm sure would be more easily understood by the children. Beautiful.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks Judy, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy

reply by Judy Lawless on 06-Dec-2021

You?re welcome, Roy.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

This is a nice retelling of the Christmas story for children, with the reason for celebrating our Saviour's birth.
Personally, I don't like reading all caps.
This line feels awkward, being 7 syllables whereas others are 8 syllables:
THREE KINGS APPROACHED, BEARING GIFTS

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks Jenny, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

Yes, that one would be good for children to sing, so maybe set it to music for them. It is clear in its message and reinforces the Christmas story well.
Thanks for sharing.
Wendy

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks again Wendy, for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy

Comment from Shirley E Kennedy

Excellent

Hi Roy,
A pleasure to read with a spiritual message new to some but familiar to millions.
It is a very special celebration of the birth of Jesus and a timely reminder of His sacrifice to save us.
Thank you for inspiring others to give thanks and praise in celebration.
Blessings
Shirley

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021

Thanks Shirley, for these marvellous comments and a super review, blessings Roy

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

And where would Christmas be without a Christmas poem from you Roy?
I was wondering of the theme this year.
I always like to see and read Christmas poetry.
You have done the cause justice.
Well done.
My best wishes.
RG

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thanks RG, for this great review and comments, blessings Roy