Rube
An army buddy teaches me a lesson in dramatic fashion41 total reviews
Comment from teols2016
Awesome! I admit I was worried in the beginning that your story employed an out-of-date stereotype about Germans. I'm glad to be wrong. That is just one of the many wonderful surprises your story delivered.
My one issue is I would have liked some details about the mission that was completed before the confrontation in the bar. I doubt combat, but a few words to describe it would forge anew the weak link in your tale.
Well done.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Awesome! I admit I was worried in the beginning that your story employed an out-of-date stereotype about Germans. I'm glad to be wrong. That is just one of the many wonderful surprises your story delivered.
My one issue is I would have liked some details about the mission that was completed before the confrontation in the bar. I doubt combat, but a few words to describe it would forge anew the weak link in your tale.
Well done.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Hi Teols, thank you for taking the time to read and review this story and for your feedback. Good point on adding more detail in places. I was wondering about that and think it would improve the story.
Thanks again, and take care!
~ Jack
