The Last Season
Imayo Japanese Poem4 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
Another one of my favorites that you have created.
Sometimes life is cruel. We look at one particular being as the target of our love and affection, just waiting for the day those feelings will be reciprocated. But alas, the youth of our days have been spent and, having waited too long, we now find ourselves in our winter years, our outer glory gone, alone with ourselves, little chance of finding another.
- Your poem was an eye-appealing work of art from top to bottom;
- the Imayo style poem seems to have been made for you;
- this was a beautiful, poignant poem - I could feel the disappointment and the grieving of love and youth lost;
- perfect artwork; both woman and tree in their winter years; spent with nothing left
Gosh, that makes me sad. I really do love this!
Gale
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Another one of my favorites that you have created.
Sometimes life is cruel. We look at one particular being as the target of our love and affection, just waiting for the day those feelings will be reciprocated. But alas, the youth of our days have been spent and, having waited too long, we now find ourselves in our winter years, our outer glory gone, alone with ourselves, little chance of finding another.
- Your poem was an eye-appealing work of art from top to bottom;
- the Imayo style poem seems to have been made for you;
- this was a beautiful, poignant poem - I could feel the disappointment and the grieving of love and youth lost;
- perfect artwork; both woman and tree in their winter years; spent with nothing left
Gosh, that makes me sad. I really do love this!
Gale
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Gale, thank you very much for your exceptional review, six stars, and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is an interesting and sad poem. So he/she was a cross dresser but never truly felt like women and being treated as one. I don't have such feeling so it's for me to understand. He must feel like a woman.
Well done.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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This is an interesting and sad poem. So he/she was a cross dresser but never truly felt like women and being treated as one. I don't have such feeling so it's for me to understand. He must feel like a woman.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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No is about an old woman remembering the past.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That's sad. I guess those "pushup bras" can only do so much. It's too bad that some women tie their beauty to only how they are perceived by their man. Instead, they should keep developing the beauty that keeps growing even in the last season.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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That's sad. I guess those "pushup bras" can only do so much. It's too bad that some women tie their beauty to only how they are perceived by their man. Instead, they should keep developing the beauty that keeps growing even in the last season.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Yes, you are right and wise. I know that now but when I was younger I lived to please my husband until he found a younger woman. If I knew then..... I'm more at peace now. I just want to be healthy.
Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
No, love is really quite different from looking enticing, love is cherishing, and valuing from the intrinsically precious thing, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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No, love is really quite different from looking enticing, love is cherishing, and valuing from the intrinsically precious thing, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
