Dead Cat
Someone left a dead cat on my porch9 total reviews
Comment from papa55mike
Well, I guess a dead cat comes in handy sometimes. This is one poem that I'm glad didn't have a picture. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Well, I guess a dead cat comes in handy sometimes. This is one poem that I'm glad didn't have a picture. What a wonderfully written poem.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That is disgusting. I'm glad I don't remember what we did with dead animals in my neighborhood. Unless we were going to eat them, which meant running from chickens with their heads lopped off as they ran around spraying blood. You wrote it very well and made it exciting. And I believe the part about setting up a dead cat at a tea party was very possible.
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That is disgusting. I'm glad I don't remember what we did with dead animals in my neighborhood. Unless we were going to eat them, which meant running from chickens with their heads lopped off as they ran around spraying blood. You wrote it very well and made it exciting. And I believe the part about setting up a dead cat at a tea party was very possible.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
Comment from Tina Crute
This was slightly gross, but had a sweet tenor to it, as far as returning a cat, even though dead, to it's owner. The ending was funny.I enjoyed your rhyming story, even though gross! Lol!
Tina
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This was slightly gross, but had a sweet tenor to it, as far as returning a cat, even though dead, to it's owner. The ending was funny.I enjoyed your rhyming story, even though gross! Lol!
Tina
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
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Ok, great! Thanks for letting me know! I will check now.
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Thanks for reading it!
Comment from Kooky Clown
I would love to read your poem but all I have is a black oblong, perhaps that is it if that is the case I am not very impressed . Sorry but this I am sure this is a mistake at least I hope so. Thanks for sorting out the problem I enjoyed you rhyme and have now upped my rating to a five. I had a similar problem see 'You buried our Cat' somewhere in my portfolio.
Thanks for sharing this rather bleak tale.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I would love to read your poem but all I have is a black oblong, perhaps that is it if that is the case I am not very impressed . Sorry but this I am sure this is a mistake at least I hope so. Thanks for sorting out the problem I enjoyed you rhyme and have now upped my rating to a five. I had a similar problem see 'You buried our Cat' somewhere in my portfolio.
Thanks for sharing this rather bleak tale.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
Comment from Taminang Therese N
I was expecting to see the dead cat or something written about it but everything is blank. What happened here. I can't see or read anything apart from the title.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I was expecting to see the dead cat or something written about it but everything is blank. What happened here. I can't see or read anything apart from the title.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
Comment from royowen
I would love this for sure, if I could only see it, the only thing appearing is the black background, and it seems a great pity After the work you've put into it.good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I would love this for sure, if I could only see it, the only thing appearing is the black background, and it seems a great pity After the work you've put into it.good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
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Most welv
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Welcome
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Thanks, Roy
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Well done
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This post is black font on a black background as far as I can work out, so unfortunately I can't see anything to review. You should consider adjusting your settings, and viewing it before release.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This post is black font on a black background as far as I can work out, so unfortunately I can't see anything to review. You should consider adjusting your settings, and viewing it before release.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry, Share A Story In A Poem contest entry, speaks someone left a dead cat on your porch, oops! Whither words! Your post is just a black, blackboard, nothing is visible, readable; it is illegible; thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on black background, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 124020D21. ALCREATOR LD
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This General Poetry, Share A Story In A Poem contest entry, speaks someone left a dead cat on your porch, oops! Whither words! Your post is just a black, blackboard, nothing is visible, readable; it is illegible; thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on black background, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 124020D21. ALCREATOR LD
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
Comment from Susan Newell
This is a very funny poem about a weirdly funny incident. You told a great story sticking with a rhyming poem. I picked up a few typos/spelling errors. Good job.
smucks ==> schmucks
crumbled ==> crumpled
Mom trends softly ==> treads?
And speaks as through ==> though
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This is a very funny poem about a weirdly funny incident. You told a great story sticking with a rhyming poem. I picked up a few typos/spelling errors. Good job.
smucks ==> schmucks
crumbled ==> crumpled
Mom trends softly ==> treads?
And speaks as through ==> though
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks...it's fixed now!
