Dear Mt. Calvary
Loop poetry about a hill I love.21 total reviews
Comment from Sherry Asbury
What a lovely thing to think of...for Calvary is the pinnacle of Christianity. This is a great loop and I wish you luck in the contest. And to think that you can see this site every day and be reminded of our Lord~
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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What a lovely thing to think of...for Calvary is the pinnacle of Christianity. This is a great loop and I wish you luck in the contest. And to think that you can see this site every day and be reminded of our Lord~
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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I do feel fortunate to see the Blue Ridge mountains every day, in the distance:) Thank you for this kind review and good luck wishes.
I appreciate your reviews:)
Tina
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good, Tina. I haven't tried a loop poem yet. I must give it a try. You have done a really good job with this one. I think it will do very well in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Very good, Tina. I haven't tried a loop poem yet. I must give it a try. You have done a really good job with this one. I think it will do very well in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Paul. You SHOULD try one! This was my first try at loop and kyrielle.Thank you for the vote of confidence. There are sooooo many good writers on here that I try not to get my hopes up, lol. I just feel blessed to have a passion for writing. Everyone needs something they love to do:)
Thanks again!
Tina
Comment from royowen
I don't think Calvary was all that high, it wouldn't have been easy to get that cross up that hill, Jesus technically would or should have been dead before He started out on the Via Delarosa that day, but took it all for our sakes, beautiful saviour, excellent write Tina, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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I don't think Calvary was all that high, it wouldn't have been easy to get that cross up that hill, Jesus technically would or should have been dead before He started out on the Via Delarosa that day, but took it all for our sakes, beautiful saviour, excellent write Tina, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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When looking for artwork, I looked up pictures and you're right. It was very craggy, rocky with boulders from what I could tell. Thank you so much for this review and excellent rating. It means so much:)
Tina
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When looking for artwork, I looked up pictures and you're right. It was very craggy, rocky with boulders from what I could tell. Thank you so much for this review and excellent rating. It means so much:)
Tina
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Well done
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I finally found a rock picture that looks more like what Mount Calvary may have looked like. I edited my poem picture. There are so many sources online, that I had trouble finding an actual picture. One site said little is left of that rock. What IS left is inside a church, a rock about 5m high. I will do more research because it interests me.
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Well done
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I have become a huge fan of loop poems lately, probably because of so many I've read due to this contest. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Jesus played the ultimate sacrifice for us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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I have become a huge fan of loop poems lately, probably because of so many I've read due to this contest. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. Jesus played the ultimate sacrifice for us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Barbara! I read so many loop poems, I thought I would try to write one! You should write one!
Thanks again!
Tina
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Thank you, Barbara! I read so many loop poems, I thought I would try to write one! You should write one!
Thanks again!
Tina
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I struggle with poetry. I have tried a few times. I quit when a reviewer said, 'It reads like a laundry list."
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A laundry list? That's rude,lol...I think there are so many types of poetry that maybe you just haven't found your groove yet? Do you write stories or something else? I will check out your page later :)
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I write prose. Romance novels.
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Tina!
Kudos!
Perhaps you have invented a new form: "Kyrielle-Loop!" or "Loop-Kyrielle!"
Appreciate your message and creativity!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hello Tina!
Kudos!
Perhaps you have invented a new form: "Kyrielle-Loop!" or "Loop-Kyrielle!"
Appreciate your message and creativity!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Diane, thanks for the kudos! This was hard to do, as it was my first time trying either one. I appreciate your cheery and encouraging message. Loop-Kyrielle has a nice ring to it!
Tina
Comment from pookietoo
This is a very nice poem for th loop poetry contest. I love that photo too. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful day today.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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This is a very nice poem for th loop poetry contest. I love that photo too. I wish you lots of luck in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful day today.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your kind review:) I hope you have a good day, too!
Tina
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You are welcome. I will.
Comment from lyenochka
Great job with your loop poem which is also a kyrielle in form, too! And it's a beautiful thing to reflect on the mount of Christ's great sacrifice for us when you look at mountains! Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Great job with your loop poem which is also a kyrielle in form, too! And it's a beautiful thing to reflect on the mount of Christ's great sacrifice for us when you look at mountains! Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much! I was thinking of trying a kyrielle, and opted for trying a loop. Ended up with a combo,lol.
A review from a sis in Christ always means so much, on poems about our Savior.
Hugs and thanks again!
Tina
Comment from MissMerri
I so much wish I had a six for this beautiful poem. It is extremely difficult to write a smooth flowing and coherent loop poem, but you have done a fabulous job with this one. I thought it was especially creative and meaningful I hope it wins first place in this contest. It is most deserving. I loved it. MM
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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I so much wish I had a six for this beautiful poem. It is extremely difficult to write a smooth flowing and coherent loop poem, but you have done a fabulous job with this one. I thought it was especially creative and meaningful I hope it wins first place in this contest. It is most deserving. I loved it. MM
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Your review means the world to me. Thank you so much! This is my first loop poem that I know of.
I was sitting in my office yesterday doing devotions and the mountains stole my gaze and thoughts!
I appreciate your words and compliments!
Tina
Comment from Theodore McDowell
I'm not a big fan of loop poems, but this is a good one. Now I see where you get that ultra-positive attitude and perspective--your faith. Well done and have a great Christmas.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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I'm not a big fan of loop poems, but this is a good one. Now I see where you get that ultra-positive attitude and perspective--your faith. Well done and have a great Christmas.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Being positive is way more fun! Faith definitely gives me reason to be happy. Thanks for your kind review and thoughts!
Tina
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Being positive is way more fun! Faith definitely gives me reason to be happy. Thanks for your kind review and thoughts!
Tina
Comment from Eunice Amero
Me too. Praise God He went to Calvary. There He took our place. Really a good poem and true. Thank you for sharing. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest. This is so true.
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Me too. Praise God He went to Calvary. There He took our place. Really a good poem and true. Thank you for sharing. You did a good job. Good luck in the contest. This is so true.
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Thank you, Eunice. I am glad you liked it. Wouldn't it be great to go and see that mountain?
Have a good evening!
Tina
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Thank you, Eunice. I am glad you liked it. Wouldn't it be great to go and see that mountain?
Have a good evening!
Tina
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Yes it sure would. You are more than welcome. Take care
