Haiku (I Woke to a World)
Haiku53 total reviews
Comment from bhogg
I'm not much of a poet, but I would say that this hit all of the elements of a Haiku. I found it well written and beautifully presented. OOps, didn't use enough words.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I'm not much of a poet, but I would say that this hit all of the elements of a Haiku. I found it well written and beautifully presented. OOps, didn't use enough words.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hahaha... those pesky word counting gremlins didn't let you pass, did they ? :). Thanks so much for your wonderful review!
Melissa
Comment from Anne-Marie brison
Dear author,
A very good and beautiful piece. Vivid imagery. Wonderful job. May God bless you and your family. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Dear author,
A very good and beautiful piece. Vivid imagery. Wonderful job. May God bless you and your family. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Anne-Marie. Thank you for your lovely words and review!
Melissa
Comment from rjuselius
This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear sugarray! It reminds us of how lost we all are in this world of ours.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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This is a beautifully crafted piece of poetry dear sugarray! It reminds us of how lost we all are in this world of ours.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Rebekka. Thank you for your lovely words and review. I appreciate your insight into my wee verse :). Thanks again!
Melissa
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from Sapphire P.
This is beautiful, heartwarming and peaceful. I just love gazing at the picture after reading your Haiku. I'd love to have this on my wall where I sit and write. What a joy that would be. This is a wonderful piece. I'd change nothing about it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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This is beautiful, heartwarming and peaceful. I just love gazing at the picture after reading your Haiku. I'd love to have this on my wall where I sit and write. What a joy that would be. This is a wonderful piece. I'd change nothing about it.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Nina. Thank you so much for you inspiring and lovely review. You make my heart warm :)
Melissa
Comment from JLR
very powerful in total, how many times have we awakened into a world sea of mist midst the liquid sky in our lifetimes? Yes for many incalculable times. Your Haiku poem creates great deep thought. A joy to read, again and again!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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very powerful in total, how many times have we awakened into a world sea of mist midst the liquid sky in our lifetimes? Yes for many incalculable times. Your Haiku poem creates great deep thought. A joy to read, again and again!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Jim! Thank you for your lovely words and insights into this Haiku. This form is a not in meter, so I always have to think really hard to find those nuances to make it have depth. So appreciate you!!
Melissa
Comment from jaded831
In such a short poem you managed to paint a picture and spark emotion, truly a talent. I grew up near water so in me you brought back childhood memories. I thank you for that. The picture adds to your words. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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In such a short poem you managed to paint a picture and spark emotion, truly a talent. I grew up near water so in me you brought back childhood memories. I thank you for that. The picture adds to your words. The entire presentation gets a thumbs up.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello there! Thank you so very much for your lovely comments and review. So appreciated!!
Melissa
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
That must have been a wonderful experience. You have expressed it so well in this short poem. As it is said, mist in the morning is nature's morning breath. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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That must have been a wonderful experience. You have expressed it so well in this short poem. As it is said, mist in the morning is nature's morning breath. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hello Sasha! Thank you for your lovely words of encouragement. Hugs!!
Melissa
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is quite clever with the subtle meaning in the first line around the word 'woke' I think. Also I love the most beautiful artwork it is paired with that enhances the haiku. Well done. Giddy.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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This is quite clever with the subtle meaning in the first line around the word 'woke' I think. Also I love the most beautiful artwork it is paired with that enhances the haiku. Well done. Giddy.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hi Giddy!!! Thank you for your lovely comments and review. So appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, expressive haiku. The imagery is appealing and imaginative. Effective
metaphor also
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, expressive haiku. The imagery is appealing and imaginative. Effective
metaphor also
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hi Janice. Thanks so very much. I appreciate your views on this one!
Melissa
Comment from Hitcher
I think you have fused the accompanying artwork beautifully with your very creative haiku. Even without the artwork the visuals conjured in the minds eye are stunning... Good luck with this one friend, impressive!
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I think you have fused the accompanying artwork beautifully with your very creative haiku. Even without the artwork the visuals conjured in the minds eye are stunning... Good luck with this one friend, impressive!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Hi Hitcher. Thank you for your lovely words. I appreciate the insight and encouragement!
Melissa
