Dandelion
haiku30 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Dandelions are God's first flower; at least that is what I told my children when they were little. They remind me of bubbles; you blow and they produce an abundance of wonder.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Dandelions are God's first flower; at least that is what I told my children when they were little. They remind me of bubbles; you blow and they produce an abundance of wonder.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from RGstar
Another fine display of the form Gypsy.
The visual aspect of it equally impressive. The mind's eye working well here.
Always a pleasure to read these now, which has grown on me over time.
My best wishes.
Have a good week.
RG
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Another fine display of the form Gypsy.
The visual aspect of it equally impressive. The mind's eye working well here.
Always a pleasure to read these now, which has grown on me over time.
My best wishes.
Have a good week.
RG
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, RG. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from miajaffri
You have brought back a memory. I wished on the white puff as a
child and watched it blow in the wind. I like the alliteration and the
imagery you have painted with your poetic words.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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You have brought back a memory. I wished on the white puff as a
child and watched it blow in the wind. I like the alliteration and the
imagery you have painted with your poetic words.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Miajaffri. Have a wonderful weekend!
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Comment from Tina Crute
You managed to create a 'floaty' feeling in this poem. The dramatic black highlight the fragility of the dandelion picture. The imagery of wishes floating, riding on puffs of wind...memorable and lovely:)
Tina
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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You managed to create a 'floaty' feeling in this poem. The dramatic black highlight the fragility of the dandelion picture. The imagery of wishes floating, riding on puffs of wind...memorable and lovely:)
Tina
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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You're welcome! You gave me much to think about and appreciate!
Comment from mermaids
I am a dandelion fanatic and this is one of the best poems I have read about them. I like the feel in your words of the dandelion floating along, a vivid picture of nature that brings forth good feelings.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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I am a dandelion fanatic and this is one of the best poems I have read about them. I like the feel in your words of the dandelion floating along, a vivid picture of nature that brings forth good feelings.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this. Great picture and description of a memory from childhood - blowing on the dandelion fluff and watching it carry our wishes who knows where.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Well done on this. Great picture and description of a memory from childhood - blowing on the dandelion fluff and watching it carry our wishes who knows where.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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You are welcome
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
In the light of Author Note, it's a nice piece of poetry as 'Spring Haiku' meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Hello Gypsy Blue Rose,
In the light of Author Note, it's a nice piece of poetry as 'Spring Haiku' meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, and beautifully depicting its theme.
Picture enhances depth and beauty of the poem.
BEST OF LUCK in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Gypsy, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Ken Weene
Nice. That the first and third lines themselves make a delightful image adds to my delight. Not sure the articles are needed and since the goal is balancing sound units not syllables, I think getting rid of them might enhance this piece.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Nice. That the first and third lines themselves make a delightful image adds to my delight. Not sure the articles are needed and since the goal is balancing sound units not syllables, I think getting rid of them might enhance this piece.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much, Ken. I appreciate your kind and helpful feedback. You are write, haiku must be as succinct as possible.
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Comment from VJWild
You had me at dandelion...they are one of nature's most beautiful gifts and so underrated! The words and the artwork are beautiful, as always! It definitely makes me yearn for Spring, and it's not even Winter yet...
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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You had me at dandelion...they are one of nature's most beautiful gifts and so underrated! The words and the artwork are beautiful, as always! It definitely makes me yearn for Spring, and it's not even Winter yet...
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Comment from dragonpoet
This haiku brigs back childhood memories of trying to catch those white fliff balls to make wishes on them..
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays
Joan
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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This haiku brigs back childhood memories of trying to catch those white fliff balls to make wishes on them..
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy Holidays
Joan
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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Don't mention it, Gypsy.
Joan
