Imagine A Fox
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Comment from R R McIntyre
While not especially humorous, this is a clever and cute little piece of wordplay.
However, in the second line, it should be who's (who is) not whose. A small issue, but spelling errors really stand out in such a short piece of writing, which brings down the score.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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While not especially humorous, this is a clever and cute little piece of wordplay.
However, in the second line, it should be who's (who is) not whose. A small issue, but spelling errors really stand out in such a short piece of writing, which brings down the score.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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You are right, my poem isn't average.
Comment from QC Poet
Conforming slightly spooky 5-7-5 entry. Good Luck to you in the contest and may you recieve great reviews. God Bless you with your entry. Thanks for Sharing your work and poetry.
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Conforming slightly spooky 5-7-5 entry. Good Luck to you in the contest and may you recieve great reviews. God Bless you with your entry. Thanks for Sharing your work and poetry.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from LisaMay
Oh my giddy aunt! That won't make people laugh - more likely they'll click off it because the photo will make their skin crawl. I think this is more like horror - so I don't think it fits the 'humorous' contest, however you have delivered a skilful poem with the required syllable count and three rhymes.
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Oh my giddy aunt! That won't make people laugh - more likely they'll click off it because the photo will make their skin crawl. I think this is more like horror - so I don't think it fits the 'humorous' contest, however you have delivered a skilful poem with the required syllable count and three rhymes.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
