A Fruitful Life
A trip through life57 total reviews
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Lovely as a song and so true...your writing has been so hopeful and filled with advice, dear one! I love seeing your name, as I know there is a wonderful treat in store!
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Lovely as a song and so true...your writing has been so hopeful and filled with advice, dear one! I love seeing your name, as I know there is a wonderful treat in store!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from phil nelson
I find myself looking for your poetry and its subtle wisdom these days. As always, this is another most enjoyable sonnet on how we should live our lives with adventure, compassion and a relaxed attitude. Thanks for sharing.
All the Best!
Phil
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I find myself looking for your poetry and its subtle wisdom these days. As always, this is another most enjoyable sonnet on how we should live our lives with adventure, compassion and a relaxed attitude. Thanks for sharing.
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from royowen
You're absolutely correct. The thought that we don't live our lives to the fullest is most distressing. Some people are looking for something they may never find, but life can be beautiful at any age, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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You're absolutely correct. The thought that we don't live our lives to the fullest is most distressing. Some people are looking for something they may never find, but life can be beautiful at any age, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from Paul McFarland
Very good advice for all of us to follow. There is a couple of spots where you deviate from your rhyming, but the great message offsets this in my opinion.
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Very good advice for all of us to follow. There is a couple of spots where you deviate from your rhyming, but the great message offsets this in my opinion.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from jenintorre
A fruitful life is a very thought provoking poem and very well written as usual. I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to many more of your excellent poems. Take care. Jen
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A fruitful life is a very thought provoking poem and very well written as usual. I really enjoyed reading it and look forward to many more of your excellent poems. Take care. Jen
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Living life to the full is essential as we don't have that much time on earth and we must not waste a single second. I adore the sentiments here. This line might need some adjustment, maybe get rid of the (I).
"I you search both here and yonder"
Love Dolly x
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Living life to the full is essential as we don't have that much time on earth and we must not waste a single second. I adore the sentiments here. This line might need some adjustment, maybe get rid of the (I).
"I you search both here and yonder"
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
AMEN!!! Once again, your wisdom shines through. I know I will listen to your poem. I hope others will also. Yes, we must live life to the fullest. It's part of God's plan. Thank you for sharing.
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AMEN!!! Once again, your wisdom shines through. I know I will listen to your poem. I hope others will also. Yes, we must live life to the fullest. It's part of God's plan. Thank you for sharing.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
