A Fruitful Life
A trip through life57 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
This is a beautifully worded piece of art. It gives a sense of hope as you go through life. It made me think of life almost as if it were a child to be nurtured and cared for.
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This is a beautifully worded piece of art. It gives a sense of hope as you go through life. It made me think of life almost as if it were a child to be nurtured and cared for.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a joyous poem. One thing about traveling, you must enjoy the scenery and location you are visiting. If you do, then it will lots of joy, happiness to you and yours.
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What a joyous poem. One thing about traveling, you must enjoy the scenery and location you are visiting. If you do, then it will lots of joy, happiness to you and yours.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
Comment from Kooky Clown
A lovely poem about living everyday to your fullest extent. I thought this was well written and it has a lot of good points about making the most of life. Well done I enjoyed it.
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A lovely poem about living everyday to your fullest extent. I thought this was well written and it has a lot of good points about making the most of life. Well done I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I'm so glad that you have found the love again in your advanced age. But I think you are right in your age because people can live longer now. You can easily go another 20 years or more.
Well done.
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I'm so glad that you have found the love again in your advanced age. But I think you are right in your age because people can live longer now. You can easily go another 20 years or more.
Well done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
Comment from oliver818
This is a nice poem with a clear message that stands out throughout the work. It flows well and is easy to relate to. I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
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This is a nice poem with a clear message that stands out throughout the work. It flows well and is easy to relate to. I particularly enjoyed the ending. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
Comment from Malerie
"Every voyage leads somewhere" I like that verse. Even without a picture, I picture a boat out to sea, every voyage leading somewhere from birth to your journey's end.
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"Every voyage leads somewhere" I like that verse. Even without a picture, I picture a boat out to sea, every voyage leading somewhere from birth to your journey's end.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Very beautiful and touching poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.
You must give your love to someone,before your days on earth are done.
Life's not over till you live it.
What you give is what you will get. Very nicely done.
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This is a Very beautiful and touching poem. It has a great flow and rhyme scheme.
You must give your love to someone,before your days on earth are done.
Life's not over till you live it.
What you give is what you will get. Very nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
Comment from mermaids
Your words teach the reader how to live. Embracing life leads to a full life. I like your lines about giving love to someone and how joy is our return. Your poem is smooth and has an almost musical feel to it.
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Your words teach the reader how to live. Embracing life leads to a full life. I like your lines about giving love to someone and how joy is our return. Your poem is smooth and has an almost musical feel to it.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
Comment from Jerome Goldberg
Jaybird1 - This is a very well written poem that sets forth a worthy philosophy of life. Well done. It is amazing how fast life seems to go by. Stay well - Jerry
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Jaybird1 - This is a very well written poem that sets forth a worthy philosophy of life. Well done. It is amazing how fast life seems to go by. Stay well - Jerry
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
Comment from Janet Foor
You must give your life to someone before your life on earth is done.
It is a joyous way to live Jay.
Thanks for sharing these wise words.
Blessings
Janet
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You must give your life to someone before your life on earth is done.
It is a joyous way to live Jay.
Thanks for sharing these wise words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
