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Informed Refusal

Variant, omicron, moronic,(same letters)

27 total reviews 
Comment from Justin Chopin
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Great questions with this piece. I thought the last line of your poem" Believing lies has become a fine art" was a perfect way to tie the obvious facts that the media has been very deceptive with the way they have presented their perspectives on the Corona Virus. Wonderful work with this .

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
    Thank You for your review and supportive remarks.
reply by Justin Chopin on 02-Dec-2021
    You're welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
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An interesting and timely poem about the condition of our world today. I'm glad that all my children are grown and I don't have to decide for them about the vaccine. Will this craziness ever end? Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
    Thanks for your review and supportive coments.
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Exceptional
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This is extremely clever, starting with the sentence describing the title (although the overkill in explanation was a bit much). There was no forcing in the use of the words. No, it all flowed extremely smoothly, and the story was good. Wonderful!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
    Thanks, Katherine.
Comment from patricia dillon
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You raise some very pertinent questions. As you say, how many more? But what can we do? We have to rely on the experts. The latest news seems to be that Omicron is a very mild strain.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
    Thanks for your review, take vitamin d and zinc as well and c get out and exercise, if you can keep healthy most people have recovered from covid 19 many are ill after the jabs. God bless you.
reply by patricia dillon on 30-Nov-2021
    You're welcome
Comment from Susan Newell
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Kudos for calling out reality. People are making fortunes out of keeping us in fear. Small businesses gone. Big businesses at all-time highs. Big Pharma raking in billions for questionable vaccines. Fauci halting use of cheap, effective, treatments and cures. We are living in a corrupt world dominated by a single incompetent, but greedy, bureaucrat. People are starting to wake up. We need full exposure of the inner workings of our health agencies and there partners in Big Pharma, and toadies in academia.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
    Thanks Susan.
reply by Susan Newell on 30-Nov-2021
    You are welcome
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This Commentary and Philosophy Poetry, Use These Words writing prompt entry, vividly speaks the story, the experience in a free flow of thoughts, with some good imagery, about a common message, effect of believing common lies; well said, well done, thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 123900N21. ALCREATOR LD

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
    Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Jodie Hammerstein
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Definitely impact of words, left me feeling kind of motionless and wondering about the world today as it stands , got me thinking alot about my family WRITE ON

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
    Thanks for reviewing