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Informed Refusal

Variant, omicron, moronic,(same letters)

27 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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No our media and government are not telling us everything. They are actually censoring information they don't want us to know. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.

https://www.msn.com/en-us/health/medical/dr-fauci-please-listen-to-the-science-on-natural-immunity/vi-AARkpKB?ocid=SL5IDHP

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
    Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from dragonpoet
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This poem flows well even with its different rhyme scheme. It uses the words well and clearly states your view on vaccinations
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
    Thank you Joan.
reply by dragonpoet on 02-Dec-2021
    Don't mention it.
    Joan
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Well, I love the peanuts characters and I haven't quite decided how I feel! But, this quirky poem gives me pause to think that babies are sometimes born stillborn. If I consider all of the so-called facts then I am not sure I want to get that booster my doctor is all excited about. Even if I do what is to say that the omicron variant strain doesn't get us all in spite of whether we vaccinated or not!
Thank you for this most informative piece!
I will ponder this some more before I go through with a booster shot!
Take good care of yourself and do not worry about the shots anymore!
Have a wonderful rest of your week!
Jesse


 Comment Written 02-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
    Thank you Jesse, Please don't get the booster! Take vitamin D& C and Zinc and stay positive.
Comment from RPSaxena
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Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting the desired norms, having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme.
The last sentence should be:
'Spreading' lies has become a fine art. It's my opinion. I hope you won't mind.
Good Luck in the contest.


 Comment Written 02-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
    Thank you.
reply by RPSaxena on 02-Dec-2021
    Welcome!
Comment from Patty Palmer
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You did well to use all of the words on the list. This COVID thing is getting out of hand now. Wear a mask, don't wear a mask. Wear one inside the house but not outside. Wear one mask. Masks don't work, Wear two masks or better three. It makes me crazy. Good luck with the contest.
Patty

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from SimianSavant
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I find pro and anti vax rants somewhat tedious at this point, having written a few myself. However the anagram comment about omicron = moronic was really funny. Almost like it was a secret message. Watch out for uneven spacing around your hyphens. Otherwise, looks good. Thanks for the read!
-H

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from Cindy Warren
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They're not telling us everything. I work in health care, so I didn't have a choice. I can't afford not to work. I don't think our right to choose is being respected.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from royowen
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I can't work out for the life of me why anti vaxxers are discriminated against, I thought this was a democracy, so I'm a little confused and amused by this, and even individual organisations, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
    Thank you.
reply by royowen on 01-Dec-2021
    Most welcome
Comment from Terry Broxson
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An excellent poem for this contest, good luck. Your commentary is very sad about the state of information coming from our government and health officials. I do think you are right on the money. Who do we believe? Good Job.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
    Thank you.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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This one meets the contest requirements. It is amazing you can compose such a poem on the subject of vaccination.

This is a political issue. I will not comment on the contents but truly feel you are a talented poet.

I like the picture. It is attracted and the picture alone will attract many readers.

Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2021


reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
    Thank You.