Do I Hear a Sigh?
How could all this happen?3 total reviews
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Quite the interesting little poem that you have here. I'm glad there was a question mark at the end of the last sentence, because I was definitely questioning that line - lol.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Quite the interesting little poem that you have here. I'm glad there was a question mark at the end of the last sentence, because I was definitely questioning that line - lol.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and
presentation.
-You did a good job
with your poem and
the required topic.
-Good examples and
very good rhyme.
-You get good points across
with a few words and humor.
-I retired from teaching and
I can relate to the first 3 lines!
-Never had imitation crab, though.
-A good entry; good luck.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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-Good artwork and
presentation.
-You did a good job
with your poem and
the required topic.
-Good examples and
very good rhyme.
-You get good points across
with a few words and humor.
-I retired from teaching and
I can relate to the first 3 lines!
-Never had imitation crab, though.
-A good entry; good luck.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words.
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You are welcome.
Comment from zanya
This poem about the workplaces raises a great big chuckle in a few short, well- chosen words -the power of those two word choices 'dreary and drab' sets the tone
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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This poem about the workplaces raises a great big chuckle in a few short, well- chosen words -the power of those two word choices 'dreary and drab' sets the tone
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your review and kind words.