The Walkers
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "The Group Grows Closer Together"The Final Gabriel Hope Journey
7 total reviews
Comment from prettybluebirds
My goodness, it took some imagination the create this interesting story. It's really not the kind of story I like to read but I found this one extremely interesting and fun to read. Once I started I couldn't stop. Nicely written and no obvious mistakes.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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My goodness, it took some imagination the create this interesting story. It's really not the kind of story I like to read but I found this one extremely interesting and fun to read. Once I started I couldn't stop. Nicely written and no obvious mistakes.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from BethShelby
I wondered what had happened to your adventure story with these spiritual warriers traveling across the country and going into battle against Satan and his demons. It is good Michael and Gabriel are along on his venture.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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I wondered what had happened to your adventure story with these spiritual warriers traveling across the country and going into battle against Satan and his demons. It is good Michael and Gabriel are along on his venture.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Hi, Beth. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Ric Myworld
It had been so long since I'd read one of your chapters that I have to go back and refresh my memory of the characters a little. Who ever called this the golden years should be shot. LOL. But I caught right on and I'm glad to have picked up on the story. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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It had been so long since I'd read one of your chapters that I have to go back and refresh my memory of the characters a little. Who ever called this the golden years should be shot. LOL. But I caught right on and I'm glad to have picked up on the story. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2021
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Thanks for stopping by, Ric.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Thanks for stopping by, Ric.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Thanks for stopping by, Ric.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from estory
There's a sense of ever increasing tension as the circle of angels sees the demons waiting for them over the hill. It is a bit long distance in this chapter; I would consider putting us more in the middle of the action, right in the middle of the fight. estory
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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There's a sense of ever increasing tension as the circle of angels sees the demons waiting for them over the hill. It is a bit long distance in this chapter; I would consider putting us more in the middle of the action, right in the middle of the fight. estory
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this story.
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from royowen
Another excellent story with Gabriel, Michael, Cal and Cris battle the demonic forces on earth, and have encounters with the forces of Evil on earth, mind you they are more than able to do so. They encounter what I think would be termed a Nephilim, but dispose of him quickly, beautifully written Mike, well done, good write, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Another excellent story with Gabriel, Michael, Cal and Cris battle the demonic forces on earth, and have encounters with the forces of Evil on earth, mind you they are more than able to do so. They encounter what I think would be termed a Nephilim, but dispose of him quickly, beautifully written Mike, well done, good write, blessings Roy
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Roy. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Most welcome
Comment from robyn corum
Mike,
Wow. These warriors are pretty stinking brave to face all of that. Sounds like good is on their side, as well. Nice!
A couple of small notes, if I may?
1.) A ragged S(t)reet-preacher started terrorizing a neighborhood close by -
2.) Is that why you said the Garrote was a young one, Michael(?)"
Nice job!
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Mike,
Wow. These warriors are pretty stinking brave to face all of that. Sounds like good is on their side, as well. Nice!
A couple of small notes, if I may?
1.) A ragged S(t)reet-preacher started terrorizing a neighborhood close by -
2.) Is that why you said the Garrote was a young one, Michael(?)"
Nice job!
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Hi, Robyn. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Robyn. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hi, Robyn. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Fiction, a chapter in the book The Walkers, speaks about the group grows closer together, stories and looks are shared before the Loosahachie Bridge; well said, well done, my dear write more, fast, carefully, thanks4sharing this, omniscient God reads-wishes forgive mistakes 2 encourage u; I, DR, per His will, love reviewing. ALCREATOR.
You may please check the typos/ inexpressive (unclear or incomplete) expressions: 1. "A beautiful woman." (???) 2. "Always." (???) 3. River bridge (???) 4. a moment, (???) then asks 5. Is that why you said the Garrote was a young one, Michael.(???) 6. with his tallit. (???) ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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This General Fiction, a chapter in the book The Walkers, speaks about the group grows closer together, stories and looks are shared before the Loosahachie Bridge; well said, well done, my dear write more, fast, carefully, thanks4sharing this, omniscient God reads-wishes forgive mistakes 2 encourage u; I, DR, per His will, love reviewing. ALCREATOR.
You may please check the typos/ inexpressive (unclear or incomplete) expressions: 1. "A beautiful woman." (???) 2. "Always." (???) 3. River bridge (???) 4. a moment, (???) then asks 5. Is that why you said the Garrote was a young one, Michael.(???) 6. with his tallit. (???) ALCREATOR
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
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Hello, my friend. Thank you for your kind words and help with this chapter!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
