Football - A Novel
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't think Melton is a possible suiter, I think he's trying to make Katherine look easy, and she's proving that she's not. I think he's possibly working for the in-laws, or Frost. This was another excellent chapter, Barbara, it's nice to catch up. I still have the next part to read!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I don't think Melton is a possible suiter, I think he's trying to make Katherine look easy, and she's proving that she's not. I think he's possibly working for the in-laws, or Frost. This was another excellent chapter, Barbara, it's nice to catch up. I still have the next part to read!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review and encouragement. I've missed your writing.
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I'm taking advantage of this break and will start in the new year. The first half chapter is a bit 'sensual' but that's it until a long way into the book and by then you'll all understand why it started that way. How's that for a teaser!!! Lol.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Melton Ivory continues to stalk Katherine.
A chapter in the book Football - A Novel
Football Chapter 34 part 2
Barb,
I will say, or maybe not Gabriel and Melton must take time and show in a clever way to a attract Katherine's attention.
Looks like you know a lot foot ball.
Which adds to your upcoming novel.
Gert
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Melton Ivory continues to stalk Katherine.
A chapter in the book Football - A Novel
Football Chapter 34 part 2
Barb,
I will say, or maybe not Gabriel and Melton must take time and show in a clever way to a attract Katherine's attention.
Looks like you know a lot foot ball.
Which adds to your upcoming novel.
Gert
Gert
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I raised four boys and my rear end graced many bleaches. All my boys played from the time they were 5 through high school. I'm sorry you had to read this with no money attached, thank you.
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Smiles to you Barb so you are what they call a foot Mom.
Comment from Begin Again
Oh Melton Ivory keeps right on pressing his luck or does he have another agenda in mind besides Katherine??? He's a creep and he most definitely knows how to push Gabriel's buttons. I hope he can control himself.
Great job as usual!!! Sorry I am so far behind!
Smiles, Carol
not field goal?
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Oh Melton Ivory keeps right on pressing his luck or does he have another agenda in mind besides Katherine??? He's a creep and he most definitely knows how to push Gabriel's buttons. I hope he can control himself.
Great job as usual!!! Sorry I am so far behind!
Smiles, Carol
not field goal?
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I am so sorry you had to read this with no money attached. I really do appreciate you.
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No problem, Barbara. I most certainly enjoy the story and have just fallen behind on everything. I want to finish my story before the end of the year and then take time to polish the whole series after the 1st. Life is so mixed up for me and it's difficult to keep up.
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I'm praying for your family.
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thanks... we need all the prayers we can get. It doesn't seem to get any better... or I am getting to worn out to know the difference.
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The times when Life seems unbearable, remember God is working inside you.
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that is all that keeps me going at the moment.
Comment from robyn corum
Barb,
I really don't like that guy. But he IS persistent. I am always amazed at these kinds of guys. If they'd put HALF the time and effort into a real job and committed relationship, he'd be a millionaire in no time AND have a dreamy girl who loved him forever. --ugh--
Thanks!
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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Barb,
I really don't like that guy. But he IS persistent. I am always amazed at these kinds of guys. If they'd put HALF the time and effort into a real job and committed relationship, he'd be a millionaire in no time AND have a dreamy girl who loved him forever. --ugh--
Thanks!
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2021
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I am sorry you had to read this when no money's attached. Thank you.
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hahaha! Silly. It's not your fault I'm so far behind. Thanks!
Comment from Aprelle Johnson
The writing in this is very good and I found myself getting more intrigued in the story as it went on. The writing voice behind this is very distinct and I am happy to say I was surprised by how much I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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The writing in this is very good and I found myself getting more intrigued in the story as it went on. The writing voice behind this is very distinct and I am happy to say I was surprised by how much I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent story my friend! I love the characters and the way the bounce off each other;-) They interact perfectly together and the storyline keeps me on my toes and holds my attention!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Excellent story my friend! I love the characters and the way the bounce off each other;-) They interact perfectly together and the storyline keeps me on my toes and holds my attention!
Thanks for sharing and may God bless you and your family;-)
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
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;-)
Comment from Sanku
The Melton guy must be mad .still following Katherine.
The chapter flowed smoothly and the interaction between the two women was interesting. Everyone is worried about Gabe's anger
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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The Melton guy must be mad .still following Katherine.
The chapter flowed smoothly and the interaction between the two women was interesting. Everyone is worried about Gabe's anger
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review. Gabriel's anger is legendary, but since meeting Katherine he's kept it undercontrol.
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end; just like running commentary with the romantic references, now and then, which make the episode more interesting.
The story is moving ahead smoothly, and in a worth enjoying way!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Hello Barbara.Wilkey,
Nice piece in continuation having captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end; just like running commentary with the romantic references, now and then, which make the episode more interesting.
The story is moving ahead smoothly, and in a worth enjoying way!
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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Barbara.Wilkey, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Tina Crute
This has a feel to it that I can't quite explain, but I will try...Your story held my interest all the way through, perhaps because there was so much conversation that it felt like a movie. I loved the natural flow of the game and interaction between Katherine and Angie. The way you didn't tell us much about Melton at the game builds suspense. I wonder what else he will try, to get Katherine's affection. I wonder how old Melton is...I will need to fan you so I don't miss anything. Great writing and very interesting!
Tina
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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This has a feel to it that I can't quite explain, but I will try...Your story held my interest all the way through, perhaps because there was so much conversation that it felt like a movie. I loved the natural flow of the game and interaction between Katherine and Angie. The way you didn't tell us much about Melton at the game builds suspense. I wonder what else he will try, to get Katherine's affection. I wonder how old Melton is...I will need to fan you so I don't miss anything. Great writing and very interesting!
Tina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the encouragement.
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You are welcome. I enjoyed it, and look forward to more!
Tina
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The fellow who is stalking Katherine is just a little eerie! I wonder if he is trying to scare Katherine out of her wits? There are several people watching out for her safety.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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The fellow who is stalking Katherine is just a little eerie! I wonder if he is trying to scare Katherine out of her wits? There are several people watching out for her safety.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you for the kind review.
