Blood brothers
Different but the same.3 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This kind of presentation delights me. I heard a situation similar to the picture that a little boy wanted to get shirts that were alike so he and his best friend who looked just like him would totally look alike. Too bad we all had such vision and perception. Well chosen. I am voting for this.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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This kind of presentation delights me. I heard a situation similar to the picture that a little boy wanted to get shirts that were alike so he and his best friend who looked just like him would totally look alike. Too bad we all had such vision and perception. Well chosen. I am voting for this.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your review and vote.
Comment from VJWild
Well done! Love it when rhymes actually make sense in a poem, tricky to do it with this structure. This is a great entry and it made me smile! Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Well done! Love it when rhymes actually make sense in a poem, tricky to do it with this structure. This is a great entry and it made me smile! Good luck!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you your review made my day.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your well-chosen eight syllables in this moving, expressive 1-6-1. I LOVE the artwork. It makes me think of how different the world would be if there were more friendships like that one.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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You have made excellent use of your well-chosen eight syllables in this moving, expressive 1-6-1. I LOVE the artwork. It makes me think of how different the world would be if there were more friendships like that one.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for you review, I?m glad I made you smile.
