Along the path ....
In a dark place17 total reviews
Comment from Melbelles
This is a fantastic poem! I could really feel your words; they spoke a lot to me. It's very structured and I love the pattern flow. I really like the picture with it too.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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This is a fantastic poem! I could really feel your words; they spoke a lot to me. It's very structured and I love the pattern flow. I really like the picture with it too.
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much I am very happy you enjoyed it, so good.
Wendy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Along the path ...' , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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' Along the path ...' , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a privilege to read and review this talented poet's work. To me this is definitely a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much! A lovely and appreciated gift of six stars.
Wendy
Comment from E. Denison
This is a beautiful bit of spiritual poetry, Wendy. I read it as a call and response, and I think it is most effective. I really enjoy the setting technique you used as well - with the offset call back of Christ in gold. This is quite well done. Thank you for sharing this powerful work of faith.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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This is a beautiful bit of spiritual poetry, Wendy. I read it as a call and response, and I think it is most effective. I really enjoy the setting technique you used as well - with the offset call back of Christ in gold. This is quite well done. Thank you for sharing this powerful work of faith.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much. You have understood perfectly what I was aiming to do. Very much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Anne Johnston
We are all going to face some dark place in our lives at some point. How great it is when we realize that the Lord is there, that He knows the way through the darkness, and that He will never leave us nor forsake us.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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We are all going to face some dark place in our lives at some point. How great it is when we realize that the Lord is there, that He knows the way through the darkness, and that He will never leave us nor forsake us.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you Anne. A lovely review and a wise one. We will always have light even in our deepest darkness if He is with us.
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You are welcome
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual poem, Along the Path, reminds the readers that the light peeks through the canopy from time to time to reveal God's love. The light at the end of the trail still shines for us to follow. Nice.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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This spiritual poem, Along the Path, reminds the readers that the light peeks through the canopy from time to time to reveal God's love. The light at the end of the trail still shines for us to follow. Nice.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your lovely review and thoughts. Much appreciated, as always.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
I will never leave you, never forsake you. This poem is simply amazing. So many of us trod through the darkest nights but Jesus is the Light shining through. Thanks for sharing this most poignant poem and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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I will never leave you, never forsake you. This poem is simply amazing. So many of us trod through the darkest nights but Jesus is the Light shining through. Thanks for sharing this most poignant poem and all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Kit. I appreciate your thoughtful review and good wishes very much.
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I enjoy reading this piece and you deserve everything, Kit.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the Spiritual writing prompt contest. I like the concept of spirituality in nature... it's a nice twist. Your poem adheres to the contest requirements. I would recommend it. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Excellent entry for the Spiritual writing prompt contest. I like the concept of spirituality in nature... it's a nice twist. Your poem adheres to the contest requirements. I would recommend it. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words, as well as your time and thoughts.
Comment from LisaMay
Your poem's emphatic delivery - with effective short lines and tight rhyming - is a beacon of hope and comfort to all those who are suffering in darkness of spirit. God's reassuring presence is there forever in a most personal way.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Your poem's emphatic delivery - with effective short lines and tight rhyming - is a beacon of hope and comfort to all those who are suffering in darkness of spirit. God's reassuring presence is there forever in a most personal way.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you. I appreciate your time, and your positive review and very supportive words.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did an excellent job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I really like the color scheme of light and dark and the way you formatted the lines. The repeated lines work well to emphasize your message. The image is a great pairing, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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You did an excellent job with your contest entry, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading it. I really like the color scheme of light and dark and the way you formatted the lines. The repeated lines work well to emphasize your message. The image is a great pairing, too.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for your kind and encouraging words Jan, and also for your good wishes. Appreciated a lot.
Comment from Dawn Munro
The message is clear, uplifting, and enhanced by the addition of the repeated biblical quote. Your presentation, too, is marvelous. Well done! Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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The message is clear, uplifting, and enhanced by the addition of the repeated biblical quote. Your presentation, too, is marvelous. Well done! Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for such lovely words. So encouraging! Thanks too for your good wishes.
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It was my pleasure. :)