Comment from Susan Newell

Excellent

Very clever little bit of flash with a good twist at the end. I suppose it is a good commentary on lust in general. Humankind tends to lust after a lot of things it thinks it wants or needs. Very thought provoking.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Lust and desire, oh what a dull place it would be without them. Like fire though they need to be kept in check

Comment from Carol Hillebrenner

Excellent

This is very amusing. You used every one of your 75 words to build the story from what seems a seduction into a funny attempt at grand theft. Hope you do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thank you, Carol. For your encouraging review.

Best
John

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Hand-counted 75 words so meets that requirement of the contest. Interesting and tends to lead story is about a man lusting after a woman. Good twisted ending.

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2021

Thanks, Brett. I appreciate the review.

Best
John