My Daughter
My daughters home was an open door to many homeless kids17 total reviews
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
It sounds to me as though your daughter is a lovely person. You evidently have much to be proud of. Nice write! Good luck in the rhyming poem contest.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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It sounds to me as though your daughter is a lovely person. You evidently have much to be proud of. Nice write! Good luck in the rhyming poem contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from irishauthorme
Hi Annie,
You indeed have a beautiful daughter!
It is seldom that we find someone who is beautiful outside and also beautiful on the inside.
The effort, caring and just plain hard work the goes with fostering is tremendous. Our Kudos to your daughter.
Good work.
irish
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Hi Annie,
You indeed have a beautiful daughter!
It is seldom that we find someone who is beautiful outside and also beautiful on the inside.
The effort, caring and just plain hard work the goes with fostering is tremendous. Our Kudos to your daughter.
Good work.
irish
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from royowen
My elder child was always God's girl, she's never changed, always been a haven for the needy. This is beautifully written, you must be so proud my friend, an excellent point of reference. Unless we become a light for the world, the world will always spiral downwards to oblivion, an excellent rhyming work AnnieDawn. Blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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My elder child was always God's girl, she's never changed, always been a haven for the needy. This is beautifully written, you must be so proud my friend, an excellent point of reference. Unless we become a light for the world, the world will always spiral downwards to oblivion, an excellent rhyming work AnnieDawn. Blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
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She is indeed.
Comment from tfawcus
How blessed you are to have such a daughter and what a lovely panegyric you have composed to honour her and recognise her fine attributes. Many of which must surely have been nurtured by you in her youth.
Whenere (Whene'er)
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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How blessed you are to have such a daughter and what a lovely panegyric you have composed to honour her and recognise her fine attributes. Many of which must surely have been nurtured by you in her youth.
Whenere (Whene'er)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Poetry, Rhyming Poem contest entry, speaks about your daughter whose inner beauty is so glorious that she keeps her home door open to the homeless kids, well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This General Poetry, Rhyming Poem contest entry, speaks about your daughter whose inner beauty is so glorious that she keeps her home door open to the homeless kids, well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from Pantygynt
This clings to its rhyme scheme (abcb) faultlessly and follows a steady iambic hexameter (not a common metre amongst poets writing in English) with many lines employing feminine endings.
An enchanting read.
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This clings to its rhyme scheme (abcb) faultlessly and follows a steady iambic hexameter (not a common metre amongst poets writing in English) with many lines employing feminine endings.
An enchanting read.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from Tina Crute
This is a beautiful entry for the contest. Chock-full of love and respect for your daughter, your message is clear: although she was pretty and succeeded at many things, her inner beauty was her greatest asset. A gentle suggestion because your rhymes are so good and bounce along on stressed syllables nicely...The eighth line doesn't have the same rhythm as the other lines. Again, not a big deal, but the stress on syllables may feel smoother with...Her life was not a game, or Life was not a game.
No matter, this is a great entry for the contest!
Tina
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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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This is a beautiful entry for the contest. Chock-full of love and respect for your daughter, your message is clear: although she was pretty and succeeded at many things, her inner beauty was her greatest asset. A gentle suggestion because your rhymes are so good and bounce along on stressed syllables nicely...The eighth line doesn't have the same rhythm as the other lines. Again, not a big deal, but the stress on syllables may feel smoother with...Her life was not a game, or Life was not a game.
No matter, this is a great entry for the contest!
Tina
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Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
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What a blessing to have an inside-beautiful daughter. even more, a daughter you respect is a treasure:)
Have a great weekend, friend!
Tina
