My Daughter
My daughters home was an open door to many homeless kids17 total reviews
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Annie, your poem is as beautiful as your daughter, both inside and out. I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed well and had good rhyming within. I especially liked:
What others have discarded
She turns it into booty
My daughter is so gifted
It comes from inner beauty
(A perfect ending and the essence of this poem.)
Lovely photo choice. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Hello Annie, your poem is as beautiful as your daughter, both inside and out. I enjoyed reading your poem. It flowed well and had good rhyming within. I especially liked:
What others have discarded
She turns it into booty
My daughter is so gifted
It comes from inner beauty
(A perfect ending and the essence of this poem.)
Lovely photo choice. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 31-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much and thank you for reviewing this poem. The picture is an actual picture of her. She really is a beautiful woman on the outside and the inside. She homed quite a few homeless kids until they could find a permanent place to live. I am very proud of her. Have a Happy New Year.
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
I am so proud you have such a wonderful daughter. Many parents blame their children but you are different. I have the same relationship with my children, two daughters, and one son. May God bless you abundantly and wish you all the very best in the contest, Kit.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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I am so proud you have such a wonderful daughter. Many parents blame their children but you are different. I have the same relationship with my children, two daughters, and one son. May God bless you abundantly and wish you all the very best in the contest, Kit.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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I thank you very much for your very kind review. My daughter has been a blessing to many and the picture is an actual picture of her. May you have a blessed week with your family.
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Tha pleasure is mine.
Comment from Lulube
This is a poem filled with love and admiration for your daughter. Great imagery and proud descriptions of her character. way to go mom. good rhymes, easy read with an easy flow
lulube
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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This is a poem filled with love and admiration for your daughter. Great imagery and proud descriptions of her character. way to go mom. good rhymes, easy read with an easy flow
lulube
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. The picture is of my daughter so is an actual one of her. She is one of a kind. She raised five of her own while helping many others. Such a kind-hearted soul she is.
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Being proud of your own is an awesome feeling.
lulube
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to your daughter Annie and she sounds like a lovely girl and her kindness and charity will no doubt be due to having a wonderful caring Mother, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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A fine tribute to your daughter Annie and she sounds like a lovely girl and her kindness and charity will no doubt be due to having a wonderful caring Mother, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. The picture is of my daughter so is an actual one of her. She is one of a kind. She raised five of her own while helping many others. Such a kind-hearted soul she is.
Comment from WalkerMan
This well rhymed and metered poem is a fine tribute to your daughter, whose inner radiance shines through to the outside, both in her caring actions toward homeless children and in her lovely appearance.
You are justifiably proud of her humble but effective efforts and accomplishments. You seem to have raised an Earth Angel. Superb.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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This well rhymed and metered poem is a fine tribute to your daughter, whose inner radiance shines through to the outside, both in her caring actions toward homeless children and in her lovely appearance.
You are justifiably proud of her humble but effective efforts and accomplishments. You seem to have raised an Earth Angel. Superb.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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What an honor to have a six-star review on this entry. The picture is an actual picture of my daughter and she is all that I described. I am very proud of her. Thank you for your kind review.
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You are most welcome, Annie. You -- and she -- earned it. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Annie,
Your daughter sounds like a wonderful giving woman, always thinking of someone else and hardly at all on herself.
Your poem is well-rhymed for the contest, and I wish you Good Luck.
My favorite verse,
"It seemed love bloomed within her
It oozed from every pore
Whatever child was homeless
She had an open door"
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Hi Annie,
Your daughter sounds like a wonderful giving woman, always thinking of someone else and hardly at all on herself.
Your poem is well-rhymed for the contest, and I wish you Good Luck.
My favorite verse,
"It seemed love bloomed within her
It oozed from every pore
Whatever child was homeless
She had an open door"
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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What an honor for your review of this entry. The picture is an actual picture of my daughter and she is all that I described. I am very proud of her. Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
A beautifully written tribute to your compassionate and caring daughter, whose inner beauty shines forth in love and concern for others. Your poem reads smoothly and well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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A beautifully written tribute to your compassionate and caring daughter, whose inner beauty shines forth in love and concern for others. Your poem reads smoothly and well. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your poem is so lovely and skillfully composed. It flows along very smoothly, vividly describing your wonderful daughter, the soul of kindness who had gone above and beyond what the great majority of people do for others! I especially like the last stanza.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Your poem is so lovely and skillfully composed. It flows along very smoothly, vividly describing your wonderful daughter, the soul of kindness who had gone above and beyond what the great majority of people do for others! I especially like the last stanza.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from RGstar
And it surely does. So good to hear of such a person. I worked long and hard for the homeless, without getting paid some two years. When you have such persons as one of the family, one can only be proud, for t is an extension of you dear author.
Bravo
Yes beautiful outside, but most important, she is also beautiful inside, which will never fade.
A nice little tribute.
My very best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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And it surely does. So good to hear of such a person. I worked long and hard for the homeless, without getting paid some two years. When you have such persons as one of the family, one can only be proud, for t is an extension of you dear author.
Bravo
Yes beautiful outside, but most important, she is also beautiful inside, which will never fade.
A nice little tribute.
My very best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing about your beautiful daughter! It sounds like she learned love and compassion at home in order to provide Home to those kids in need.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you for sharing about your beautiful daughter! It sounds like she learned love and compassion at home in order to provide Home to those kids in need.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thank you so much for your kind review. She has been such a wonderful Mom to so many that I had to say something in her honor. As you can see in the picture, she is as beautiful on the outside as she is on the inside.
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Yes, I see that her beauty shines on many levels!! 💞
