"Heart Spoken Moments"
Viewing comments for Chapter 43 "The Woods"Fine poetry and stories from the Heart
2 total reviews
Comment from Yardier
Great wandering, introspective work. Brings a challenging question to the reader, "Is this the place, or is it near? Are we the same or just insane?"
Christ knows and if you know Christ, you know.
You know?
Yard.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Great wandering, introspective work. Brings a challenging question to the reader, "Is this the place, or is it near? Are we the same or just insane?"
Christ knows and if you know Christ, you know.
You know?
Yard.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Thanks for coming into the woods to play with me!
Because the Woods are the place to be!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from E. Denison
Great job with this experimental poem, Ricky1024. I like that you worked to place the last word or paired word(s) in the line as the opening to your next line. This has a very cool "spoken word" effect that would make this kind of a poem great for an open mic night. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Great job with this experimental poem, Ricky1024. I like that you worked to place the last word or paired word(s) in the line as the opening to your next line. This has a very cool "spoken word" effect that would make this kind of a poem great for an open mic night. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
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Actually just edit this and made it a lot better!
Thanks for playing in the Woods with me!
Doctor Ricky