Witness
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Words from the Flames"Modern struggle in another world.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This General Fiction, a chapter in the book Witness, speaks about words from the flames, Karsa speaks at Raklidi's vote on the war; well said, well done, thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 123900N21. ALCREATOR LD
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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This General Fiction, a chapter in the book Witness, speaks about words from the flames, Karsa speaks at Raklidi's vote on the war; well said, well done, thanks 4 trusting reviewers wisdom, I appreciate 4 sharing this on white background, matching font colour and readable font size making this legible, I, DR, wrote 114 books p in black & white, R 123900N21. ALCREATOR LD
Comment Written 30-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it and I hope you have a good day!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is a well written chapter. I like the pacing of the story. It doesn't feel rushed. Good use of dialogue to bring the characters alive. And this easily kept my interest. Great job!
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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This is a well written chapter. I like the pacing of the story. It doesn't feel rushed. Good use of dialogue to bring the characters alive. And this easily kept my interest. Great job!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I'm glad it came across well. I hope you have a wonderful day.
