Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko

Exceptional

The objective correlative of the poem reminisces the primacy of relying on the saving grace of the lord in an ill health scenario, where a greater percentage of those afflicted by liver and kidney diseases die off without an opportunity to get back home alive.

The work highlights four true life story events that call for massive thanksgiving occasioned by the saving grace of the lord.

The work earns its texture through the effective use of corroborating anecdotes.

Excellent work. Bravo.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021

Trying my best.
And, thanks Lloyd.
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reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 30-Nov-2021

Remain Blessed.

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

This is another strong poem. Love your word choices and the creativity that you put into each poem that you share. Love the message at the end and hope you also had a great holiday weekend.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2021

I would review the other day by Dolly and she stated she seen so much progress in my work.
And, she's been here over a decade also.
You need to understand my grief and pain had been incredible.
So I basically started journaling in my poetry to save my life.
Hence it was pretty sad and grieving work.
And almost as the seasons change and we get out of the gloom and colder the Winter and then to the Spring
I must be blossoming?
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