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Crazy Dates 4

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Comment from royowen
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I can imagine who had "borrowed" the truck in my mind. I can remember almost everything, albeit a little hazily, in my drinking days, but I was never "out to it" completely, but a lot of guys have that I've known. Beautifully written Bill, great job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
    Thank you, Roy
reply by royowen on 24-Nov-2021
    Most welcome Bill
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I know you served in the marine so it sounds like true story. I have never tried this kind of dating before so I can't fathom how you can just forget everything that happened the night before. I guess there must be drinking involved.

Well done.

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
    Drinking during dating are for some, or many, a requirement. Over doing is something else.
Comment from BethShelby
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I've heard a lot of stories that start in bars and end up in bed alone with little memory of the night before. This is the first with a missing truck, but I would have imagined that had happened before. I assume this is fiction but with you, I'm never sure unless it envolves shape shifters.

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 Comment Written 24-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
    This is basically true with a slight fictionalization to make me look better than I am.