Everybody Get's a Parting Gift
It could've happened this way35 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
I wish I had a six for this. I remember the day and how the FBI was in a hot pursuit toward finding the guy. Amazing, all these years they still have no clue. Thanks for sharing. Good one Earl.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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I wish I had a six for this. I remember the day and how the FBI was in a hot pursuit toward finding the guy. Amazing, all these years they still have no clue. Thanks for sharing. Good one Earl.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Ben, a virtual six is cool especially since this is the first recreational writing I've done in six months. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Pantygynt
If only! Oh yes, if only.
There were so many restrictions placed on entries to this one and you obeyed them all to the letter. In so doing, you came up with a highly original story nestling comfortably within the word count limitations. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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If only! Oh yes, if only.
There were so many restrictions placed on entries to this one and you obeyed them all to the letter. In so doing, you came up with a highly original story nestling comfortably within the word count limitations. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Humour Fiction, ~Family Story ~ Fiction writing prompt entry, speaks about everybody gets a parting gift, it could have happened this way; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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This Humour Fiction, ~Family Story ~ Fiction writing prompt entry, speaks about everybody gets a parting gift, it could have happened this way; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Begin Again
Ah, at last, the truth can come out and so many secrets can be uncovered.
Well, it makes a terrific story anyhow. Knowing a "wanted criminal" instead of just "ole dad". But then, maybe it's better to live off the radar and not be involved with anything bad. Just saying! Great story!
Carol
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Ah, at last, the truth can come out and so many secrets can be uncovered.
Well, it makes a terrific story anyhow. Knowing a "wanted criminal" instead of just "ole dad". But then, maybe it's better to live off the radar and not be involved with anything bad. Just saying! Great story!
Carol
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much Carol. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from BethShelby
What a cool story! I enjoyed reading this. It was very creative. I thought it was based on a true story because I do remember a guy with some money jumping from a plane and disappearing. I didn't remember four parachutes though. I wondered why four.
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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What a cool story! I enjoyed reading this. It was very creative. I thought it was based on a true story because I do remember a guy with some money jumping from a plane and disappearing. I didn't remember four parachutes though. I wondered why four.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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The for parachutes was to make them think he was going to make the crew jump with him so all parachutes had to work.Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
