Running Blind
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Running Blind~Chapter 28"The Blind Girl's toughest cold case.
22 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Ana is a very courageous woman. I hope her plan works. I wonder how long they will notice that the motorcycle is gone...I guess we will find that out in the next chapter...
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Ana is a very courageous woman. I hope her plan works. I wonder how long they will notice that the motorcycle is gone...I guess we will find that out in the next chapter...
Comment Written 21-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the great review and for taking the time to catch up. Christmas blessings to you always and your family,
Sal XOs
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Did I really miss a whole chapter? It just goes to show, how crazy my life has been, lately. When I started reading the next chapter, I realized that I had missed this one!
A lot happened here! Suzy and Miles got a whopper of a gift from a very generous Detective Sally Law, and poor, beleaguered Analiese tries to hatch a plan to trap Tony -- but what will become of her?
I only have one suggestion for a revision:
and it's close enough for us to baby sit...."
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and it's close enough for us to babysit...."
I hope to review your next chapter soon, before the promotion expires later! And of course, I need to find out what happens next.
Miles, grinning "like a lovesick fool"! You do have a way with words, Sally. That was funny.
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Did I really miss a whole chapter? It just goes to show, how crazy my life has been, lately. When I started reading the next chapter, I realized that I had missed this one!
A lot happened here! Suzy and Miles got a whopper of a gift from a very generous Detective Sally Law, and poor, beleaguered Analiese tries to hatch a plan to trap Tony -- but what will become of her?
I only have one suggestion for a revision:
and it's close enough for us to baby sit...."
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and it's close enough for us to babysit...."
I hope to review your next chapter soon, before the promotion expires later! And of course, I need to find out what happens next.
Miles, grinning "like a lovesick fool"! You do have a way with words, Sally. That was funny.
Comment Written 15-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 16-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the superb review and generous stars, dear one. I'm so glad you were able to catch up. Sorry to be late in my response. I have relapsed and not feeling very good. Hopefully, it passes. It means so much to me that you enjoyed this. Love and hugs,
Sal XOs...
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Yes, it was good to catch up. Now I have to see if I missed anything else!
I'm so sorry you relapsed. I hope you're feeling better by now, but if not, please feel free to send me a pm or an email, to tell me what's wrong, if you feel alright about sharing it. But anyway, God knows it and will hear my prayers!
Sending my love, Mary Kay xoxo
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I think it's just a combination of things and my immune system. I dunno, at 66, this flu has hit me hard. Thank you, again. Blessings, Sal XOs...
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I wish a friend could have given me a new house as a wedding present! Lol. This was quite a chapter you've given us, smiles and tears in the first half as we cheer Suzie and Miles as they start their married life, and then we have Ana putting herself in danger to get that rat back in prison. Ken will be worried sick when he discovers she's gone. Excellent chapter, Sal, well done!! :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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I wish a friend could have given me a new house as a wedding present! Lol. This was quite a chapter you've given us, smiles and tears in the first half as we cheer Suzie and Miles as they start their married life, and then we have Ana putting herself in danger to get that rat back in prison. Ken will be worried sick when he discovers she's gone. Excellent chapter, Sal, well done!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 14-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2021
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Actually, someone did give us a house when we lived in Niagara Falls. It was really sweet too. I?ll never forget it. We were in the ministry at that time. I?m glad you enjoyed my chapter. Blessings abundant,
Sal XOs
Comment from Bill Schott
This is a real mix of happy times and anxious anticipation of what will happen to Analiese out on the Harley supposedly looking to cut to the chase with her ex-husband. Always a great read. Owe you a star.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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This is a real mix of happy times and anxious anticipation of what will happen to Analiese out on the Harley supposedly looking to cut to the chase with her ex-husband. Always a great read. Owe you a star.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars, Bill. Both are so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)) xo
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Sally,
And here I thought you were going to wrap up this detective tale. I guess I was wrong.
First the wedding reception... Miles and Suzy, how lucky can they get? A blue house as a wedding gift? Wow! It takes 20-25 years to pay for a house. No wonder the two of them are jumping up and down!
But then, there's Analiese Irving, giving the slip to Russ DeWoody, taking his Harley without asking, and putting herself in danger. Why would she do that? Tony is out to kill her. She knows that. I guess she doesn't like being backed into a corner. The only defense is to attack. And I thought Tony's next move would be to skedaddle. Again, I was wrong. So here we go again!
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Hi Sally,
And here I thought you were going to wrap up this detective tale. I guess I was wrong.
First the wedding reception... Miles and Suzy, how lucky can they get? A blue house as a wedding gift? Wow! It takes 20-25 years to pay for a house. No wonder the two of them are jumping up and down!
But then, there's Analiese Irving, giving the slip to Russ DeWoody, taking his Harley without asking, and putting herself in danger. Why would she do that? Tony is out to kill her. She knows that. I guess she doesn't like being backed into a corner. The only defense is to attack. And I thought Tony's next move would be to skedaddle. Again, I was wrong. So here we go again!
Nicely penned!
Hugs,
Kimbob
Comment Written 07-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2021
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Still going. I?m glad you enjoyed this. My chapters are shorter for many reasons. Finale by year?s end, hopefully. A slow physical recovery for me as I near two weeks. Thank you for the lovely review and generous stars. It means so much. Sending you my best today as always and blessings for Christmas,
Sal XOs
Comment from BethShelby
Analiese seems willing to live dangerously. I hope she knows how she hopes to pull this off without getting hurn. You story keeps taking new turns but that is how you keep is reading. I'm enjoying it.
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Analiese seems willing to live dangerously. I hope she knows how she hopes to pull this off without getting hurn. You story keeps taking new turns but that is how you keep is reading. I'm enjoying it.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the excellent review and kind compliments. So glad you're with me. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...
Comment from royowen
I think perhaps Analiese is up to something that might be danger to her, and Ken Washington at this stage thinks she didn't pick up her cell phone cause she was watching a movie. Meanwhile Sally has bicentennial a wedding gift of something blue to her favourite bride, Suzy and Frenchman miles, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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I think perhaps Analiese is up to something that might be danger to her, and Ken Washington at this stage thinks she didn't pick up her cell phone cause she was watching a movie. Meanwhile Sally has bicentennial a wedding gift of something blue to her favourite bride, Suzy and Frenchman miles, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind compliments, Roy! Sal XOs...
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Well done
Comment from country ranch writer
Glad the loved birds were finally wed and gonna start their life together in wedded bliss. With a ready made house to boot as a gift. Who could ask for anything more!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Glad the loved birds were finally wed and gonna start their life together in wedded bliss. With a ready made house to boot as a gift. Who could ask for anything more!
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you so much, dear Barbara. Sal xoxo's
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Yum!
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Smiles
Comment from WalkerMan
This interesting chapter begins as a heartwarming delight as newlyweds Suzy and Miles receive as a gift the blue house they had admired without knowing Sally and Jackson already owned it. You handled this scene and its dialog beautifully.
In Section Two, Russ DeWoody reveals to Ana that Tony Alfanzi has escaped. Though alarmed at first, she comes up with a scheme to get him "locked up for good." Clearly, whatever her plan is, there is great risk involved; but her mind is set, and, in Section Three, she dives into it by making an appointment with Tony by phone. He's smart enough to be wary and take precautions, so the suspense is back to peak. You described her steps in starting Russ's Harley as though you've done so yourself.
In Section Four, Ken Washburn, who already has an engagement ring for Ana and still thinks she is safe with Russ, does not worry when she fails to answer his call on the third ring as usual. The last sentence is in keeping with his state of mind and heart.
Superb, and aptly illustrated by the Yuletide Camellia.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This interesting chapter begins as a heartwarming delight as newlyweds Suzy and Miles receive as a gift the blue house they had admired without knowing Sally and Jackson already owned it. You handled this scene and its dialog beautifully.
In Section Two, Russ DeWoody reveals to Ana that Tony Alfanzi has escaped. Though alarmed at first, she comes up with a scheme to get him "locked up for good." Clearly, whatever her plan is, there is great risk involved; but her mind is set, and, in Section Three, she dives into it by making an appointment with Tony by phone. He's smart enough to be wary and take precautions, so the suspense is back to peak. You described her steps in starting Russ's Harley as though you've done so yourself.
In Section Four, Ken Washburn, who already has an engagement ring for Ana and still thinks she is safe with Russ, does not worry when she fails to answer his call on the third ring as usual. The last sentence is in keeping with his state of mind and heart.
Superb, and aptly illustrated by the Yuletide Camellia.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and shiny six stars, Mike. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. My dad and brothers had cycles. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :))
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You are most welcome, Sal.
Ah, that explains how you know that. :)) -- Mike
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
It seems to me that Ana Is taking a big risk slipping off to rendezvous with Tony. It is sort of a mystery to me. I'm not sure why she would want to run into him., especially without a police escort. That is clearly the point of tension in this chapter, so we shall see. How that goes.
PAL Z
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Hello Sal.
It seems to me that Ana Is taking a big risk slipping off to rendezvous with Tony. It is sort of a mystery to me. I'm not sure why she would want to run into him., especially without a police escort. That is clearly the point of tension in this chapter, so we shall see. How that goes.
PAL Z
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thank you for the kind review of my book chapter, dear Z! Sal :))
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You're welcome, Sal.
PAL Z
