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Witness

Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "A Haven on the Run"
Modern struggle in another world.

2 total reviews 
Comment from AJ McCall
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I know I haven't reviewed much of the previous chapters but I can say proudly that reading this chapter has got me even more intrigued in the story more than ever now. This isn't a story about one person's survival but an entire people's survival. The way you manage to weave reality and fiction together is MINDBLOWING! Karsa kinda reminds me of myself. I love her character. I can't wait to see what happens next!!

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you have a good day.
reply by AJ McCall on 24-Nov-2021
    You're welcome! And yes, I am!! I hope you are as well!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This General Fiction, a chapter in the book Witness, speaks a haven on the run, and speaks about Karsa and the others leave the ruins of Seisa behind; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2021

reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
    Thank you very much for reading and reviewing! I appreciate you giving it the time and I hope you have a good day.