Final Quick-draw Picnic
a poem11 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your vivid use of words captures life from the ant's viewpoint clearly. "It's a picnic" is a fitting last line that sums up your words. You did well to use this group of words and came up with a poem of nature.
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reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Your vivid use of words captures life from the ant's viewpoint clearly. "It's a picnic" is a fitting last line that sums up your words. You did well to use this group of words and came up with a poem of nature.
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Comment Written 22-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Elaine.
