Complete in Him
I believe that Jesus died for me!27 total reviews
Comment from Modee
Prayer is just talking to God - and with God hopefully. Pretty cool poetry here and I wonder how many people don't pray because they think they have to be formal. It's simply talking to/with God. :)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Prayer is just talking to God - and with God hopefully. Pretty cool poetry here and I wonder how many people don't pray because they think they have to be formal. It's simply talking to/with God. :)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2021
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Thanks, Modee God Bless you.
Comment from E. Denison
Great entry for this faith-based contest, Lauralumummu. Your experience with faith is very clearly defined in your lines, and your journey through spirituality is present. The coloration provides an additional joyful tone that is being hinted at through your lines, and the picture you selected pairs nicely. Thank you for sharing this joyful work.
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Great entry for this faith-based contest, Lauralumummu. Your experience with faith is very clearly defined in your lines, and your journey through spirituality is present. The coloration provides an additional joyful tone that is being hinted at through your lines, and the picture you selected pairs nicely. Thank you for sharing this joyful work.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Clara Lara
Well said, without faith where are we? We got to believe to be free. We have to know his presence is there to allow him into our lives. I really like how you worded it from perspective to reality
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Well said, without faith where are we? We got to believe to be free. We have to know his presence is there to allow him into our lives. I really like how you worded it from perspective to reality
Comment Written 29-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your thoughtful review.
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
The objective correlative of the poem reminisces the wholeness that overtook the protagonist on account of his or her being born again in Christ.
The work highlights his or her quest for the lord; his unflinching support that followed and how it has coasted him or her through life.
The work earns its texture through a deliberate flaunting of the attributes of God.
Excellent work. Would make an excellent outing in the faith poetry contest.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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The objective correlative of the poem reminisces the wholeness that overtook the protagonist on account of his or her being born again in Christ.
The work highlights his or her quest for the lord; his unflinching support that followed and how it has coasted him or her through life.
The work earns its texture through a deliberate flaunting of the attributes of God.
Excellent work. Would make an excellent outing in the faith poetry contest.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2021
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Thank you, Lloyd, your thoughtful review means a lot to me.
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Remain Blessed.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Spiritual Poetry, My Faith Poetry contest entry, speaks you believed that Jesus died for you, HE is real, your life was changed by His holy spirit, now you are completely whole; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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This Spiritual Poetry, My Faith Poetry contest entry, speaks you believed that Jesus died for you, HE is real, your life was changed by His holy spirit, now you are completely whole; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this and nice reviewing this legible post on white background, post more, fast, time is limited, precious, rare (good) gift, I, DR, wrote 114 books, R 123300/N21. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
You have really revealed yourself in this poem. It is such joy to have complete faith. You have done well with the rhyming and the shape of the poem is interesting.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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You have really revealed yourself in this poem. It is such joy to have complete faith. You have done well with the rhyming and the shape of the poem is interesting.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2021
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Thanks for your review, I appreciate it.
Comment from Tina Crute
Your faith clearly shines through your words. The yellow is so appropriate for the light in you. Nice rhyming and I love the picture and how the whole presentation fits together!
Tina
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Your faith clearly shines through your words. The yellow is so appropriate for the light in you. Nice rhyming and I love the picture and how the whole presentation fits together!
Tina
Comment Written 24-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2021
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Thanks, Tina, I appreciate your kind review
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You're welcome:)
Tina
Comment from zanya
That's an interesting comment in the notes 'start a conversation today' with God - the poem portrays the profound Faith of the poet right from the opening line
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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That's an interesting comment in the notes 'start a conversation today' with God - the poem portrays the profound Faith of the poet right from the opening line
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thank you Zanya, Your review and comments are appreciated. God bless you, Laura
Comment from Janetsue
This is a wonderful statement of faith presented in a poetic form. It is an uplifting and joyful posting. You never know when someones testimony will prompt others to seek more information and have their hearts open up to the glory of the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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This is a wonderful statement of faith presented in a poetic form. It is an uplifting and joyful posting. You never know when someones testimony will prompt others to seek more information and have their hearts open up to the glory of the Lord. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thank you for your review, I appreciate your supportive comments. God bless you. Laura
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Complete in Him ' , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. to me this is a true six.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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' Complete in Him ' , is an exceptionally well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. to me this is a true six.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2021
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Thank you, my friend, your comments and the stars mean more to me than you can ever know, God, bless you. Laura xo
Laura, you're more than welcome.
God bless you too and have a great week.
the Duchess xo
