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Grieving Hearts

Viewing comments for Chapter 50 "4 the Glory of Love"
My sad Heart emoting @utilizing it's 'Heart-Brain'

2 total reviews 
Comment from MissMerri
Excellent
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This is a most unusual poem, obviously written with much feeling and heart. I very much believe it is the right thing to do, to allow organ and tissue donations when a loved one dies, or have it on your driver's license that your own can be donated in the case of your death. Thank you for this wonderful reminder of the importance of the cause. MM

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
    I try to write on the subject at least once a week.
    And, it's an important subject to keep fresh in somebody's mind.
    And, also an important message that needs to be spread.
    Thanks for sharing my work
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The objective correlative of the poem reminisces sacrifice in its rarest form carried out to the glory of love.

The work highlights thorny paths of life evacuated and made smooth for a refreshing drive made possible by another.

The work earns its texture through the effective use of harrowing anecdotes of pain duly assuaged by the protagonist.

Excellent work. Donating body parts for others to live is not an easy task.

 Comment Written 22-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2021
    As usual your reviews are both well thought out and exceptional!
    Thanks,
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 27-Nov-2021
    Remain Blessed.