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Comment from Ricky1024
"Cute animals"
It's a chapter in Brian's book of poems.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
PS: I used to have 22 cats now I have one!
Gaylord Focker!
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"Cute animals"
It's a chapter in Brian's book of poems.
This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
PS: I used to have 22 cats now I have one!
Gaylord Focker!
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I totally agree with you on how cute kittens are. And you picked a sweet picture. You do, however, need to use capital letters to make your writing look more professional. Capitalize Cute, Animals (leave out the apostrophe as you simply mean more than one), Vets, Beach, National, Geographic. Good luck with this.
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I totally agree with you on how cute kittens are. And you picked a sweet picture. You do, however, need to use capital letters to make your writing look more professional. Capitalize Cute, Animals (leave out the apostrophe as you simply mean more than one), Vets, Beach, National, Geographic. Good luck with this.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
