If I could Whistle
with wonky meter2 total reviews
Comment from Eric Clausen
So is it safe to assume that Thistle lived up to her name and was a real prick???
Or is Ed the prick of the prose? What if her name were Rose?
Keep it up good flow good imagination
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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So is it safe to assume that Thistle lived up to her name and was a real prick???
Or is Ed the prick of the prose? What if her name were Rose?
Keep it up good flow good imagination
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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Well, Sir Clausen, thistle prob'ly feels a bit prickled over her rating for she is anything but average.
Comment from Ricky1024
It started out cute but it ended kind of strange?
But it was still well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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It started out cute but it ended kind of strange?
But it was still well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Good luck with this.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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thanks Doc.
I agree, it's a rather strange poem.
I ran out of steam last night, but thanks for your very nice comments!
