Rumble to the Rescue
It is fortunate that some plans are not realised.30 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This seventy-five-word story, Rumble to the Rescue, has the proper set up and gives the readers a happy outcome to a desperate scene. Nice.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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This seventy-five-word story, Rumble to the Rescue, has the proper set up and gives the readers a happy outcome to a desperate scene. Nice.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Bill,
Thanks for taking the time to review my entry. Lets see how it goes in the competition. Take care.
Barry
Comment from RGstar
A good twist. It almost seemed a part of a chapter, or the ending of.
I like when an author pushes the reader to think. Even with just a few words.
Bravo.
Well thought through.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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A good twist. It almost seemed a part of a chapter, or the ending of.
I like when an author pushes the reader to think. Even with just a few words.
Bravo.
Well thought through.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to review Rumble to the Rescue. Rumble has turned into a bit of a hero. Perhaps a treat of biscuits would be enough reward.
Take care and have a great day.
Regards
Barry .
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great entry for this contest. Short but tells a good story. For a person to desire to take their life must mean they have no hope of things ever getting better. Thankfully, the guy's dog loved him enough to make a way for him to change his mind.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Great entry for this contest. Short but tells a good story. For a person to desire to take their life must mean they have no hope of things ever getting better. Thankfully, the guy's dog loved him enough to make a way for him to change his mind.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Anne,
Thanks for taking the time to review Rumble to the Rescue. Yes sometimes things get too much for some people but this time there was a happy ending. Take Care
Barry
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You are welcome, Barry
Comment from nomi338
I would say that Rumble earned a tasty dog bone, a nice cold drink of water in his favorite dish, and a chance to sleep on the master's bed. He should also get to take his walk whenever he is ready to do so. Get that dog a Life Saver badge.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I would say that Rumble earned a tasty dog bone, a nice cold drink of water in his favorite dish, and a chance to sleep on the master's bed. He should also get to take his walk whenever he is ready to do so. Get that dog a Life Saver badge.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to review my entry. Yes I think Rumble deserves a chance to sleep on his masters bed. Have a good day and take care.
Comment from damommy
Guardian angels appear sometimes in the least expected disguise, such as Rumble. You told this story in its entirety with very few words. Outstanding. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Guardian angels appear sometimes in the least expected disguise, such as Rumble. You told this story in its entirety with very few words. Outstanding. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thanks for taking the time to review my entry . It is appreciated and we will see what the judges think of it. Have a good day and take care.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this flash fiction. It has a great surprise ending which is so important. A very good entry for thd competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this flash fiction. It has a great surprise ending which is so important. A very good entry for thd competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Jen,
Thanks for taking time to review my flash fiction entry. All the best to you and have a good day.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I happen to believe that in situations like this God puts something in our path that prohibits us from carrying our our original plans. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I happen to believe that in situations like this God puts something in our path that prohibits us from carrying our our original plans. Thank you for sharing this entry with us and good luck.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Barbara,
Thanks for taking the time to review my entry. We will now let the judges decide. Take Care and have a good day.
Cheers
Barry
Comment from NANCY V. FORREST
A masterful way to pack a huge story into a few words. The presentation is smooth and realistic--and Rumble is most certainly its hero. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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A masterful way to pack a huge story into a few words. The presentation is smooth and realistic--and Rumble is most certainly its hero. Nicely done.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Thank you for taking time to review my entry. Yes Rumble is the hero and deserves a special treat. Please take care.
Cheers
Barry
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This may be a winner. Gripping beginning--Stunning ending. You used your allotment well. Vivid imagery of scene and his final thoughts before the plunge. Spot on at 75 words.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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This may be a winner. Gripping beginning--Stunning ending. You used your allotment well. Vivid imagery of scene and his final thoughts before the plunge. Spot on at 75 words.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Elizabeth,
Once again thank you for taking time to review my entry. The scenario just fitted in so neatly to this type of contest. Please take care and have a good day.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Very good story in so few words. The title didn't really give the point away until the end. The short sentences in paragraph one indicate a mind with a lot of stress. The second paragraph was all about relief. He couldn't abandon Rumble. Best of luck in the flash fiction contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Very good story in so few words. The title didn't really give the point away until the end. The short sentences in paragraph one indicate a mind with a lot of stress. The second paragraph was all about relief. He couldn't abandon Rumble. Best of luck in the flash fiction contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2021
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Carol,
Thanks for taking the time to review my entry . I see in your photo that you have a dog as well. Probably not named Rumble but just as loving.
Anyway have a great day and take care
Cheers
Barry
