"The Book of Death"
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
This was a fine poem. I was drawn in by the title, and glad I stayed for the read. I especially liked all the bracketed attachments to whisper sweet nothings. e.g.
Whisper Sweet Nothings?
(Like never before?)
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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This was a fine poem. I was drawn in by the title, and glad I stayed for the read. I especially liked all the bracketed attachments to whisper sweet nothings. e.g.
Whisper Sweet Nothings?
(Like never before?)
Comment Written 21-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2021
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I thank you Katherine for enjoying my work.
And also for honoring me.
The one that I just presented before midnight is much better.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Robert Trudel
Oooooooh. Very lovely and very enticing. Who would not be lured by such an offer. It is only at the very end when we find out who the sweet talker is that we pull back. Well done.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
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Oooooooh. Very lovely and very enticing. Who would not be lured by such an offer. It is only at the very end when we find out who the sweet talker is that we pull back. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021
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