Comment from moongirlwriter

Excellent

Life doesn't get any better than receiving a trike on Christmas morning and then having the whole day to ride. When children grow up. . .Christmas morning is very different. Definitely not as much fun for adults.

 Comment Written 20-Nov-2021

Comment from Eunice Amero

Excellent

Very cute. When we're young we enjoy it so much more than when we are old. Good poem. I Can feel his excitement. I could hardly wait to open my gifts Good work. I am so sorry l dont know what happened. But you deserve a 5.

 Comment Written 19-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2021

Hello Eunice: I thank you for all of the many reviews that you have given to me. As usual...you are appreciated. Eunice, please allow me to make one request. A one star review means that a poem needs extensive improvement. Please tell me how I can improve my poem. Again...I thank you, my friend. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.

Comment from Terry Broxson

Excellent

A very nice entry for this contest. I do think kids would relate and enjoy this. Good luck. I was about 11 or so when I got a red Schwinn. And I did ride that thing all day long. Great memories and a very good job by you!

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2021

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Santa Clause gave the kid a bicycle. What a great thing to do and place to go. Biking will make your journey much more fun and faster. I'm sure he will be playing with it the whole day? Maybe not.

Well done.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2021