Comment from Lordinajamjar

Excellent

A fine sentiment Iza.

Might I humbly suggest substituting "I come far away to see the Lord" to "I have come afar to see the Lord"

Good luck in the contest

John

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2021

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Sounds like something that one of the wise men said when they arrived in Bethlehem traveling from faraway to see the baby Who would be the King of Kings. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Beautiful picture is shared for all to relive the beauty of this sacred day for all to embrace and take away only joy of the birth of our Lird on his special day if being born into the world,

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You did a wonderful job writing an entry for this contest. You said a lot with an important message in such a few words. Great job. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Oh yes indeed, the three wise men came a great distance from out of the East to see the Lord, in response to their own predictive research, bringing gifts, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : I (come) far away
Suggestion. Came from far away to see the Lord. (8 words)

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021