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"The Gift of Life."

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True storiesof life loss and tragedy in this world

3 total reviews 
Comment from country ranch writer
Excellent
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As long as there are donors the gift if life will never end. A life nay end but others may since again being to carry in and survive to tell others that because if Jason the had a second can't if life it lives to live on,

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
    Thanks again!
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by country ranch writer on 17-Nov-2021
    Hugs
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
reply by country ranch writer on 18-Nov-2021
    Smiles
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

The objective correlative of this chapter of the book reminisces a long wait on a mother for the delivery of her child, which turned out to be stillbirth.

The work highlights an ominous prelude to the delivery; with a light rain and chessnut.com game outing by the father as pastime to await the delivery of the child.

The work highlights and likens the protagonist chessnut.outing to the protracted delivery of the baby, who turned out to be stillborn.

The work earns its texture through the use of effective imagery and anecdotes.

Excellent work . Keep the flag flying.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 18-Nov-2021
    Thanks again Lord for your wonderful reviews, comments, and time.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by Lloyd T. Okoko on 19-Nov-2021
    Remain Blessed.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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Nothing can be more devastating than the loss of s child. A gnawing pain that never ends. This is a special, heart-felt tribute sure he would appreciate. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2021
    Thanks Brett.
    And, yes losing a child that way.
    Will alter the rest of your life.
    Ricky