Bitter Cold Morning
5/6/5 Winter Haiku19 total reviews
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
I love your winter haiku, Gypsy, especially the imagery in the 2nd line, and thought it clever and creative to represent the 1st two lines with one image and the satori line with another. Very eye-appealing.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I love your winter haiku, Gypsy, especially the imagery in the 2nd line, and thought it clever and creative to represent the 1st two lines with one image and the satori line with another. Very eye-appealing.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your feedback and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
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Hugs back :)
I keep you in my thoughts and prayers.
Thanks for sharing such beautiful poetry.
Gale
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Haiku speaks about silence in the bitter cold morning with a twist, crow breaks the silence; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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This Haiku speaks about silence in the bitter cold morning with a twist, crow breaks the silence; well said, well done, thanks 4 sharing this, happy reviewing this legible on white background, my dear write-post more, fast, time is precious-limited, I, DR, wrote 114 books on God, Humanity, Truth. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate your feedback and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from zanya
Just love the title preempting the theme - a moment in the depths of winter captured eloquently and almost tangibly with sound and vision and color - brrr--
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Just love the title preempting the theme - a moment in the depths of winter captured eloquently and almost tangibly with sound and vision and color - brrr--
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
It's that turn of the season and the remaining berries should be enjoyed by the birds who have to weather the winter months with reduced food sources. Lovely presentation of the "dewy blueberries" and the crow.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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It's that turn of the season and the remaining berries should be enjoyed by the birds who have to weather the winter months with reduced food sources. Lovely presentation of the "dewy blueberries" and the crow.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words, Helen.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Jasmine Girl
What a beautiful presentation again. The overall atmosphere looks bleak. These look like blueberries, though. Ending with a crow is ingenius.
Well done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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What a beautiful presentation again. The overall atmosphere looks bleak. These look like blueberries, though. Ending with a crow is ingenius.
Well done.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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oh, thank you for letting me know. I thought they were elderberries
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
gypsy hugs
Comment from Ulla
Hola Marival. I loved this winter haiku. It has such a lovely imagery. I'm with you all the way. We are going through an unusually cold spell where I live in Spain. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Hola Marival. I loved this winter haiku. It has such a lovely imagery. I'm with you all the way. We are going through an unusually cold spell where I live in Spain. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Thank you very much, Ulla, I would love to be in Spain right now, even with the cold winter.
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As you know, the sun is warm, but nights are quite cool. I love my adopted country. Always have, since I was a little girl.
Comment from NaughtieScribe
I recognized the style well before I read your author notes. Your poem feels and breathes the Japanese style. I love the imagery and the solitary feel of your work. Well Written, Well Done.
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I recognized the style well before I read your author notes. Your poem feels and breathes the Japanese style. I love the imagery and the solitary feel of your work. Well Written, Well Done.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Hello, Naughtiescribe, I appreciate your outstanding review and six stars, you are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a contrast between the noise of the crow and the clicket of the elderberries that are disappearing under the cloak of the dew. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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What a contrast between the noise of the crow and the clicket of the elderberries that are disappearing under the cloak of the dew. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Iza, thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Janetsue
I have a friend who just bought farm property with the idea of growing elderberries. They are now a highly valued crop by the health food industry. In the past, the bushes used to grow wild and farmers always pulled them out because they were such a nuisance. Times sure have changed! I enjoyed reading this very much. Smiles, Janet
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reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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I have a friend who just bought farm property with the idea of growing elderberries. They are now a highly valued crop by the health food industry. In the past, the bushes used to grow wild and farmers always pulled them out because they were such a nuisance. Times sure have changed! I enjoyed reading this very much. Smiles, Janet
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Comment Written 16-Nov-2021
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2021
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Janet, thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
